My heart broke
when i saw him within
the injustice he suffered
what they said to him1
they beat him down
and caused him great pain
they hurt him so much
that he didn't get up again2
he just lay there
as they beat him down
he didn't move
nor make a sound3
they broke his soul
they poisoned his heart
they hurt him so much
that he fell apart4
little by little he tore at the seams
little by little they killed his dreams5
the pain was too great for him to bare
so much so
that his warm heartfelt eyes
became a cold stare6
he bid farewell to the world
as he blew it a kiss
before he fell into his depression
his black abyss.
Author notes
This was about my friend, i wrote it about a week ago, tell me what you think of it.
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Comments
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That was amazing! I loved it. It was touching, I Felt the emotion coming from it also. Bravo!
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That was beautiful. I really loved it. The fact that it was personal and about someone you knew made it especially touching. Good job!
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