I don't understand why, because it hurt so much when you left and abandoned me. Yet what hurts even worse is that I would still die for you.
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I always did love this type of lines. For me, it just seems to show the depth of feelings. Please comment!
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I love romance like that also. Sappy. hardcore true romance. lol.
Two great sentences.
Beautiful. These would make for a truly great hook to a wonderful romance story I'm sure.
Thanks very much for your entry!
Pixie
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Wow... this is very well written. I'm not a big fan of romance thingies either but this.. I love it
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