Um... I don't know, it's a poem, I just wrote it lol.

I lay in darkness for so long
that I saw colors where there were none
so long that the shadows whispered lies to me
I thought I had been asigned to hell
removed from humanity
my mouth sealed against all words
but the words I could not find
were not needed1

Umm... and I can't think of anything else lol.

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  • Much-Dipstick
    1 day ago
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    LOVE IT, Shawn!!!!!! God I miss you but it's good to see you logged on recently, cause it means you're alright love and snuggles to you! Talk to you real soon I hope and beautiful work lol *sniffles*


  • Lachrymose.
    November 4
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    OMG *GASPSFAINTSDIES* I LIKE LOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS. <3

    • ShawnTheDinosaur
      November 5
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      awww, thanks, even though I think it sounds unfinished, I guess I kind of really like it too.


  • SCREAMxTOxxBExHEARD
    November 4
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    I like this. It's fine how it is. It doesn't need to be finished because it's finished already


  • widline
    November 4
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    I am pround of u and ur poem said like irs about me

    • ShawnTheDinosaur
      November 5
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      Err... wait what? I don't understand the ending of what you said.lol. Im sorry!.

      I still think it sounds strange, but everyone says it is finished. but... i dont know.


  • MsAlee gold member
    November 4
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    This seems to be finished to me. you don't have to say anything else.

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