The stillness of the night was broken as an inhuman howl was flung into the dark sky -- a keening wail that carried on the wind and brought with it a sense of both paralyzing fear and electrifying fervor -- and it seemed that all who heard knew that this was Lupa's ultimate cry of love, of hope, of freedom. Ed, unaware of what had come to pass and halfway across the world, felt a chill run up his spine and glanced uneasily behind him, as if Lupa's passion had traversed the globe to softly stroke his back in a lover's caress.
Author notes
Inspiration: Edgar Allen Poe
Possible springboard for a story involving my friend's and my characters.
Yeah, that's really two sentences. 
A contest entry
- Stun Me in 2 Sentences by Lady Pixie.
175 points, ended November 17, 2009, 48 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Too rambly?
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Not too rambly at all. And I love that this was inspired by Poe. I love Poe.
These sentences are wonderful. They stunned me certainly. Great work! Thank you very much for your entry!
Pixie
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wow! powerful stuff!!!
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hey.
Firstly thanks for entering.
This got me hooked so easily, the first line was all it took. if you continue this you will have to let me know.
I love..
"as if Lupa's passion had traversed the globe to softly stroke his back in a lover's caress."
During that line though you have the word 'to' twice.
Thanks once again for entering, good luck in teh contest.
Staci
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Thanks for pointing that out!
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ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh i think you win this contest my man.
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