Maddening really, this...public display of internal indecency of which many pride themselves on. Order replaced with anarchy which is even eating at itself in an attempt to become the next evolutionary pinnacle of pure chaos.1
I do wonder you know, from time to time you know, what the hell has driven me these last few months, since my last internal conversation with yours truly, the scratching of fingers on keyboards, the whir of the fan in the background, nowadays even writing is technological and therefore near bloody impossible. Poetic justice my ass.2
It' mind boggling really, the instinctive roars within that scream keep at it, don't stop, tomorrow'll be a better day... It's never really a better day, it's just occasionally a stop gap before the worse one hits.3
Wouldst thou swear thine allegiance to me in the smoke filled rooms of a house engulfed in flame if I held the secret to your survival? Of course you would you treacherous Cretans and once outside the door you'd show me the same respect the sewer urchins get. And you, for all your polish and shine are no better indeed, you wreak of ineptitude and falseness.4
The venom I spit upon these pages is but a taste of that which bubbles within, you think this is an indication of my despisal of about 95% of humanity? Take a step into my head young one, i'll show you darkness that no light can penetrate, i'll poison your soul and swallow your mind, rape you of all innocence and spit you back out into the real world to fend for yourself eyes open nice and wide but without a hope in the world of surviving a fortnight, weak pitiful little shit.5
You see I've come to realise that most of you are little more than the great masturbators of the world, getting off on your own self engorgement, pleasuring yourself to your own god complex. Impotence must be a bitch.6
This is the decay into madness, not the arrival, just the journey, where fetid flesh meets a mindset bending, snapping synapses and perceptions of reality challenged by the very idea that everything we know is little more than an illusion. 7
I'm the ringmaster in this circus, I dawn my mask and play the biggest hypocrite of us all, very little is real and that which is, is known only to those who know me well. The rest of you see, only what I want you to see, the greatest parlour trick of all.8
The nastiest mind fuck you'll ever taste. 9
Care to take a spin?10
Author notes
It's been a while since I've written anything personal, the road to madness has always been a theme I liked, and when I write in the dark styles I usually feel better for it.
Enjoy my deviant vent.
Comments
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Truly disturbing
Wonderful creation. Frankenstein got nothing on you. The malice and evil madness make me want to disinfect my monitor screen. This is definitely first class fright. Bravo.
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Nicely Dont ES
Very impressive style of writing.
I find it difficult to write like this so I'm quite impressed, Well Done Sir!
Kudos to you
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Your word choice was superb, your tone was excellent, it was very poetic, and brilliantly dark. The flow was very good, it was captivating, and it had very strong messages. The only thing that I found that could have been improved is the way the message was portrayed. The insanity overshadowed this, masking its true meaning behind dead eyes, though perhaps I have not been studying literature for long enough to understand it quite as well as I could have.
A very enjoyable piece, recommended to all with a dark, sinister mind and a touch of insanity.
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So you do write stuff!
Very interesting hateful rant. The best guess I had/have is that the narrator doesn't like people in general. It also seems that the person hates insanity, including their own and pretend to love relish in it.
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Fascinating read. The descent into madness is a slow soul staining experience. Paragraph 5 gives conveys this brilliantly.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Thanks for the great read
The diction is incredible. It is very "Poe-esque." However, I would like for there to be a reason behind the journey into madness. It is hinted at, but only in a cursory way. I think of Cask of Amontillado and this resembles Montressor's introduction into the reasons for murder. I think that is why I am looking for the enemy here. I think this is a great beginning for a really compelling and fascinating character. You should totally give your vent some plot and it would be magical.beginning: 5, language: 5, ending: 4.
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Very intricate, and it all builds to create an almost magical affect. Lovely.
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I love paragraph 6.
Well done... wonderful rant, and ever so eloquent.
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