This Morning

I was so hungover I wanted to vomit but try as i might i could not do it, not for lack of trying and I was trying very hard, too hard some might say, but i don't really care what they say.They're always judging me, watching what i do, making little comments,squinting,scheming,judging-always judging.

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  • Lady Pixie Greeters member
    November 4

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    I appreciate you taking the time to put in an entry. There are grammar issues with this, however, that would make this much more than two sentences if it were to be corrected properly. But, I do thank you for trying this and for taking your time with the contest This does draw some attention to the reader. Reminds me quite a bit of a hangover. lol.

    Thank again for your entry.

    Pixie


  • Sonic Banana
    November 3
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    um... no... >_> this just doesn't make sense

    • Lucifetus
      November 3
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      Thank you for your candid comment. I sincerely appreciate your oppinion. I found it both full of information and handy hints. You have seriously effected the way in which I will write forever. Your oppinon means so much to me and I thank you.

      • Sonic Banana
        November 3
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        lmao I love sarcasm.. and yes apologies for making my comment so vague... alright you crammed a lot of words into these 2 sentences and I just frankly wasn't stunned..

        • Lucifetus
          November 4
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          You are right, I probably could have done better. I was actually REALLY hungover when I wrote it. couldn't think of anything else besides that.

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