I never thought anything as horrific as a dangerous mental disorder could happen to me, but nightmares like this are real, and more terrifying than anyone ever imagined. Who wouldn't be afraid of their own insanity?
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For Lady Pixie's contest
A contest entry
- Stun Me in 2 Sentences by Lady Pixie.
175 points, ended November 17, 52 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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in answer to that question: those who are sane ;]
...this could become an interesting story -
This is a great hook that shows wonderful potential to an intense story I'm sure
I have a small suggestion though- and this is only an opinion of mine so you're free to take it or leave. Maybe it's just me, but I think the second sentence would sound better with 'And' instead of 'But'. "And who wouldn't be afraid of their own insanity?"
Like I said, could just be my own thinking though
Great work! Thanks for entering the contest!
Pixie
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you're right. I'll change that. Thanks!
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You crammed a lot of words into here, but other than that it was good
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