Emancipation

All my life I've been in confinement like a prisoner1

Letting others dictate saying, "they know whats best for her"2

All my life I have allowed others to live their dreams through me3

What I really wanted out of life I didnt even expect to become a reality4

All my life Ive tried to people please5

Not even giving a damn about my own needs6

Until now, today the chains are released7

I am going to live MY LIFE only for me8

Without cash, I'm paying for my own bail9

Breaking free from this family and so called friend created jail10

I'm going to walk outside into the bright, beautitful sunshine11

take control of my life, which is only mine12

Not giving a damn about what you think I should do13

because my dreams are the only ones I'm making come true14

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  • Cajun.Lullaby
    November 6

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    Wow, sadly, I can relate to this poem so very well. I had an abusive father that I had to live with until I was 15 years old and it was all about making him happy, nothing else. I felt like such a prisoner until my mother and I got away from him. I feel like your poem was written just for me.

    If this is how you're feeling right now, then you have not only my sympathies, but my understanding as well. Great job conveying the emotions in this piece - and thanks for making me feel like maybe I'm not alone out there.