Why did you take my innocence?1
Why do you invade my dreams turning them into nightmares?2
Why did you ruin my child hood?3
Why did you take something so precious to me that can't be returned?4
Why did you leave these horrid memories with me?5
Why did you torment me?6
Why when i see someone with similarity's do I cringe?7
There is only one word I have to ask you8
WHY?
A contest entry
- sad poetry by easily amused.
100 points, ended November 23, 22 entries
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Comments
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awesome work! I loved the grammar and spelling!
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That is amazing you are very good at writing you know. You should never wonder if you're good. As long as you like your work, it doesn't matter about anyone else.
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Pretty depressing
I hope this is a work of imagination. Good caution, but I hope you didn't have to pay this price. The emotions really bleed through.
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This poem left me wondering WHY?
Brilliant!!!! This is the second poem I have read from you and I am still impressed. good job!!!
Miss Anime
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Beautiful.
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