Can you tell me if there is real happiness?1
Is there real joy?2
Is there real love?3
Is there some one who will love a girl who's past haunts her? 4
Can she have some one's heart and them know the tare's that torture her even now? 5
Will she be able to have love even with the memories she holds deep with in?6
Will there ever be any one that will be there when she wakes up crying for the nightmares of her past taunt her in her sleep, when she's in the car and a flash back hit's her and she flips out, 7
when she can't take it anymore will he be there to hold her and call her his angel? 8
Will all the tears she's cried and all the ache in her heart, 9
and the painful,10
dreadful memories ever be replaced with love??11
Can he fill the Void in her heart with himself?12
All she wants is to be held and call Angel that's all nothing more nothing less With sincerity. 13
Is that at all possible??14
She can't erase the past nor for tell the future. 15
She fight back the tears with out some one there who truly loves her, Is that to much to ask??
A contest entry
- sad poetry by easily amused.
100 points, ended November 23, 22 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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That is beautiful, You write poetry very well it's fantastic.
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Haunting
This was very difficult to read because the background intruded into the wording. Some spelling errors para 15 for tell is not spelled correctly. But the work itself is affecting.
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Added to finalists....
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Wonderful
This is beautiful!!!! It was really sad...... one of my favorite poems!!!!!
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I love the lines:
"Will she be able to have love even with the memories she holds deep with in?"
and
"She fight back the tears with out some one there who truly loves her, Is that to much to ask??"
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You know what??? I love it so much I am going to book mark it!!!!
Miss Anime
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