I just don't know anymore.1
I need to get it out, but you are the only one I can talk to. 2
I'm not sure, 3
But, 4
No one else seems to understand. 5
They say they want to help, but they never can.6
I want to say everything, 7
But I am afraid. 8
Afraid I'll break down and cry. 9
Afraid you'll see me differently. 10
Afraid you'll never look at me the same way again. 11
Afraid. 12
So afraid.13
Can you help me? 14
Can you save my life? 15
Can you save me from falling? 16
Falling, falling down into my grave. 17
Please do not bury me. 18
Keep me alive. 19
You give my life meaning. 20
Stay with me. 21
Stay with me until the end.22
Author notes
This a kind of very subtle letter to my future self. Not very obvious at all, so I'm not sure if it really fits the bill, but I'll enter anyway =)
A contest entry
- Dear Me by I Write naked.
175 points, ended November 5, 20 entries
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Comments
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thank you very much for entering. I liked the way how this was wrote. I would hope that your future self would understand you better than this. I can see where this type of letter would be perfect for a person's past self. Thank you again for your entry great job
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Awh what's wrong??? You okay??????
(Nice poem btw!! Good luck for your contest)
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