Satiine Chapter 1

((Just in case you're wondering, I made a copy of this on quizilla..I cant remember which account, Lady13 Mirror13 I cant remember which is why I don't use I dont use it anymore. So if you saw it no, I didn't steal it. And if someone is saying their the one who did it their lying. If I could Id show you the msn conversations Ive had about this sorry with my friends weeks ago. Sorry I just can't stand the thought of someone stealing my work. Anyway, on QuizillaI was starting it off as a  "gravitation" crossover. It was just easier. But Gravitation is the work of the most awesome...MAKI MURAKAMI!!! I may involve a crossover at some point just for romantic spice but not in Chapter one. All of these characters here are my own!! MIIIIIIIIIINE!!!))1

~ There are so many times in life, in the world, when people come together in the most miraculous ways, in such angelic and fantastical forms that some are hard put to understand the beauty of it all. With these words we bless the memory of...~2

" Izanami Kiyama, Nokiko Tachigawa, Mika King, Lia James...You requested to see Ms. Arisuto ?" The assistant, Akeno asked and bowed slightly at the girls appearance. They were the top models for Mirror 13 Fashions, a very high end, successful fashion design company. Izanami had come straight from her current town..but originally came from Kyoto. Nokiko was Iznami's best friend who had introduced her to the company..her father was the owner of a Multi billion dollar video game company. Mika was a German/british girl whom they'd met on a tour, the company took her on shortly. And Lia James was a beautiful African/japanese girl who'd also joined them while in London. Izanami yawned and smiled at Akeno. "Yes we did...Thank you Akeno" She said and pushed back her long stunning, dark red hair. The quartet walked into the large business room where their manager was waiting. "Yes, well what is it you would like to discuss?" Ms Arisuto asked sharply. Arisuto had always been an up tight, derisive bitch.3

Lia grinned maliciously, in fact all the girls had odd looks of evil satisfaction on their faces. "Were quitting..."Lia said simply and matter of factly. Arisuot blanched and fell backward out of her seat. "YOU CANT QUIT YOU HAVE A GOD DAMN CONTRACT!!"She shrieked. Mika and Nokiko were to busy laughing to say anything. Izanami laughed and pointed to a small tin in her other hand. "These were our contracts...Until the CEO burned them.."Izanami said ever so politely. Arisuto had just lost her top four models. due to her viscous and disrespectful attitude. "We simply couldn't stand you anymore dear. Don't act surprised..You must have seen this coming.."Izanami said and stood up. "You are so full of shit you dumb.."But Lia cut her off by punching her square in the jaw. "You are just a manipulative dumb ass whore.."Lia groweled and the girls swept out of the room. The truth was they had quit, and Nokiko's father had given them full run of a small record store.4

After that day the girls formed a band..one that would carry them so much farther than they thought it could. And it was called ..Satiine5

Author notes

The first chapter is a bit boring I know. And they cuss a lot, but that's just how it goes. And if you are offended by their bad mouths, please don't complain to me about it..I quite enjoy cussing myself and I get enough flack about it from my elders. ANyway, EIther in Chapter 2 or 3 something very impactful will happen..I guarantee You will be crying by the end of this series which I am turning into a manga. ANyway, only constructive criticism please...

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  • TooRainbow
    November 18, 2005
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    I don't think this is boring at all. In quite, it's full of action. I love the conflict you create between the women in this piece. We, especially the successful, career-minded ones, have a knack for bartering to get the upper hand. Invariably SOMEONE has to win the fight. You do a great job of depicting this female phenomenon here. Your characters are quite interesting and I really like the fact that they are so diverse in terms of nationality and background. I shall have to follow this story. Very well written. Thank you!
    Sheryl