Commune (working title) chap 2

"You're a stupid lil Bitch, you know that right"1

Alicia walked over to Hester, huddled over the toilet retching.2

Hester didn't reply, Choosing instead to throw herself at Alicias legs, burying her head against them and Sobbing quietly. Alicia then reached over and flushed the toilet, before turning on the shower, with one hand Under the lukewarm Stream, she wound and twisted her fingers in Hesters hair, tugging occasionally at the thick brown curls.3

Hester spoke up, her voice cracking. "He Probably hates Me now..."4

Alicia Giggled, not entirely nastily." Probably, you ragin' Dyke, God, you know How he feels about his Dad, And you're just as big a Sinner as he is"5

"Bu-but he's always been fine with me liking girls.."6

"God Het, I know you're not very good at thinking, but surely you have some sense About Dave, Ever the Martyr, Voice of God And junk, he thinks he can change you."7

Hester said nothing, and unable to ignore the steam from the shower, went to stand up, Alicias hand Tugged sharply at her hair, causing her to cry out.8

"Sit"9

Alicia, with one hand tangled in Hester's hair, Began tugging At the baggy Shirt draped over Hester's slim Slight form, dropping to her knees, She quickly unclasped Hester's bra. "Not that the kid needs it mind." Alicia Chuckled inwardly.10

"right, up we get" She said, standing up and bringing the smaller girl with her, before stripping her off her too big Pajama shorts.11

"Now, are you going to get in the shower, or Are you going to stand there like a retarded amputee?"12

Hester finally found her voice, Though her eyes will still more interested in the floor, (ten tiles by seven tiles, if you're interested, checkerboard)13

"ca-can you get..can you please Leave Alic-Alicia?"14

Alicia shrugged and turned around, heading for the door. As she stood in the doorway, she turned around, Smirking, as she so often did.15

"don't bother me none, Though I've seen you watch me, so it's a tad unfair, don't you think?"16

and with that she was gone, and the light was out. Hester let out a soft squeal, Which was cut Off by the door shutting.17

As she stood Limply there, She felt her mind cloud with Anger, Stupid fucking Alicia, Bloody pervert, taking off her clothes while she was like that, As if Hesters shame meant nothing to Her, As if it was a mildly interesting Detail In Alicia's Goddammed world, That wasn't what Normal people did!18

Mind you, she thought to herself, Alicia had always been that way, She'd always took direction, and she'd always broken the rules of what was normal, what was right, what was expected.19

No, Not always, In school she'd always been the Perfect student, passing with no apparent effort, staying late, volunteering for All the clubs, Regardless of who was in them and what they stood for, And the school Loved her for it...20

No, the only time Alicia broke the rules, was if it..Amused her. Personal gain was preferred, But As long as Alicia enjoyed what happened, that was all that mattered.21

Hester shivered, She was starting to Hate Alicia, But she didn't like that, So tried not to think about it.22

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  • seasonsoflove
    November 3
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    Nice. Cant wait for chapter three!!! please please please let me know when you add it!!!!