Bliss1
Is a warm shower on a cold afternoon
when no one is home
when no one can judge2
Warmth3
is a friend waiting up just to say hello
when no one else is there
when no one else can say otherwise4
Friends5
are people who never stop
never stop to ask why
never hesitate to defend6
People7
are misguided, confused, and sad
but can become something fantastic
but can help themselves in so many ways8
Confusion9
is a simple state
that can be defeated
that can be overcome10
Defeat11
is not regret
should not be considered permanent
should not guide life12
Life13
is full of mistakes
is full of music
is full of magic14
Music15
is when words stop
says what voices alone can not
says what voices alone are afraid to16
Voices17
fill the empty silence
cover us with warmth
cover us in bliss18
Bliss
Author notes
Um. I need like 130 more words for the day so I got this out. The idea of writing a poem about bliss was in my head for a little while, so I started with that and let it take me where it wanted. The entire thing took like 3 minutes, so yeah...
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Comments
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Your AN almost seems to suggest that you aren't happy with this piece. I think this poem is brilliant! The descriptions are well founded, each of them as meaningful as the next. Well done!
I do wonder, though, for NaNoWriMo are you putting together a book of poetry? Just curious.
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