Soul Writer (poem)

Write your soul word for word
Tell me your darkest secrets ever told
Make me love you, make me hate you
Hours by hours and days by days
You spill your soul for me to bear1

You are the soul writer
While I am a soul eater2

I feed off broken souls
To replace the soul that I don’t have
I try to ease away my pain
By cause everyone around me to feel the same3

You are the soul guardian
While I am a soul stealer4

I take what is not mine
I never give them back
You fight against me
Thinking you can save the lost souls that I have eaten5

You are the soul lover
While I am the soul hater6

How can I live knowing that I tear up souls?
Simply because I am evil
I want to stop
But something inside of me doesn’t want to7

You are the soul writer
So write me a good soul
Give it to me
So I can be as pure as before8

Only then will I ever stop
Once again, I gain back the soul
That was stolen from me long time ago9

Author notes

Got inspired from my ultimate all-time favorite band, Matchbox20. The song was 'You Won't Be Mine.' Excellent song to listen to whenever you get the chance.

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  • Deidara-is Smexy
    November 3
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    awesome work! I loved the grammar and spelling!

  • scifibob
    November 2

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    Your soul has been poisoned
    It is tortured and tormented
    Turned against your will
    It feels as if you must kill

    You weep and you wail
    All to no avail
    You shout and you curse
    This evil you can't reverse

    You once were good and kind
    But that has been put behind
    For your soul to regain
    You must put aside the pain

    In order to live
    You must first learn to forgive
    Before anyone else
    You must start with yourself

    For your soul to clense
    You must make amends
    For you soul to save
    Goodness you must crave

    By curbing your wrath
    You begin the right path
    By stemming your ire
    You save you soul from the fire


    • Lekos Memory
      November 2
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      You are definitely a soul writer. ^_^ Wow that this is very good. How long did it take to write this?

      • scifibob
        November 2
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        Thank you. I don't really care all that much for poetry, but I do dabble sometimes. It took about 15 minutes to write. Glad you liked it.