Flickering Flame: Chapter 5

It was morning in the city, the skyscrapers painted gold with strokes of sunlight. Dirge Shadowtalon, in all her dark glory, was perched upon her balcony. She gazed into the distance, surveying the maginificent skyline, backed by a sunrise. She spread her great wings, which had a span of at least twenty feet, and threw herself over the edge, plummeting into a dive. She quickly pulled up and gained altitude, soaring over the entire city. The mountains were visible in the distance, and she was making her way to the largest one, Skullhead. It was the ancient meeting place of the clan of the dark phoenixes.1

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