It was a Monday morning, and Riley woke up in fright. She looked at her clock 4:50. 1
"It's to early to wake up." She said." I am to tired as it is." She flopped in her bed for about 10 minutes until she went to sleep. 2
That morning she woke up happily. At breakfast she told her mom about her dream.3
" What was your dream about?" Her mom asked.4
"Well, it was that we were inside on a sunny day. Suddenly all the lights went out. We tried everything we could but the lights never came back on.And the worst part is that no one could see anything and tons of people got hurt." Riley said. "Well" Said her mom."Just don't think about it tonight. Cause it's nothing big." Her mom was wrong. Thats because that night Riley fell asleep and... Boom! Her dream was back. Now it was worse. Everyone was in a pitch dark place. In her dream there was screaming everywhere. That morning she woke up crying. Her mom was towering over her. "Bad dream?" Her mom asked. Riley nodded. She walked out of her room. All of the sudden, The lights went out. Riley screamed. It was so dark, that her sister was bumping into the hard wall in no time. Riley jumped over to the light switch and flicked the light switch up. "Few!" She said with her eyes closed. Then she opened her eyes and fainted.After that, She woke up and heard screaming. She looked around. Well not actaully cause she could not see anything. She got up and felt the walls. They were covered in blood. She tripped down the steps and ran into the kitchen closet. There were matches,icing containers, and... Candles! She took the matches and lit the Candles. That night she went to bed and everyone had light in her dream. Actually, that is not true. The truth is that........HER DREAM WENT AWAY.5
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yoooooooo sister.

nice, just next time MAKE A NEW PARAGRAPH WHEN A NEW PERSON SPEAKS. or else your paragraphs get long and yucky. *shudders*
it was confusing in parts but overall ok. keep going.
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