I Love You...Oh Yes I Love You...

It's rather depressing, waiting for love,1

Always on the edge of my mind.2

But I get up and go,3

Maybe to show, that love will find me, in kind.4

A piercing arrow that winds itself in,5

Twisting right into your heart.6

I've known it once, just once, before,7

That arrow- it tore me apart.8

My heart is healed now, much better, thanks.9

And I've begun to hold up my head.10

For I do want a lover, to hold me close,11

No matter what else I've said.12

Sometimes I lay, and just think to myself,13

Will he ever come?14

Will I ever wake up and go out to find,15

That I might have found my love?16

My one dear love! You know I am here.17

Just like I know you're out there.18

Know that it's true, whatever I do,19

When I say this:20

I love you.21

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Just a random inspiration I had to write down. Hope you guys like it. It's corny, but I dunno...comment truthfully.

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  • wolfgirl151
    November 2
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    I think its really good Ringo


  • Painter Meli
    November 1

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    Awwww

    I wuvs this. =)

    beginning: 3, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5.

    • Thank yehs! Very much. ^-^

      • Painter Meli
        November 1
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        Yay!!!

        Welcomed ^____^

        'Tis love, though, 'tis love. =]
        (Be glad that I didn't find anything that could be fixed. xD)

        • xD I know- haha. I was hoping for that tho... Rather disappointing...just kiddin'! Indeed, what would we do without love?

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