A Wish of Unexistence

(Ultra short story, just trying to make a concept and deliver it somehow)1

Rated PG - Brief Adult Language.2

Chapter 1 - The Buildup3

"Happy birthday!" his mother exclaimed hoping for another result from the three last years.4

"Oh yay!" he falsely replied, "I've ALWAYS wanted a GAMEBOY!"5

"I'm sorry honey, it's the only thing I could afford..." his mother admitted.6

"So? It's my BIRTHDAY! I should have what I actually WANT!" he yelled, leaving his mother to tears.7

"Why?" she thought. "Why this? I TRIED to give him the best of the best... I needed that money for rent you literal !" she raged on.8

"I wish..." she continued, "I wish he was never born sometimes, I wish a wish of unexistence.9

She had matched the magic words. But little did she know, that under SOME curcumstances, some wishes really DO come true.10

Chapter 2 - The Climax11

She continued to cry.12

"Honey, I need a hug..." she spoke slowly and tearfully.13

"Honey?" she began to grow with anger. "Honey, please answer me!" she grew more serious. "Micheal G. Stewart!" she had said his full name... it was serious.14

She busted thru' the bedroom door, index finger in the air and haulted.15

"No..." she said. "This is IMPOSSIBLE!" she cried, "NOOOOOOOOO!!!" she screamed curled into a ball.16

"Please god, bring him b-back! I didn't mean it! I'm so sorry!! I'll never say the words 'I wish' again!!!"17

Instantly her eyes 'opened' and she was in a room. With white everywhere.18

"God?" she asked.19

"No. His angel, sent to this room to talk with you. He does not speak directly with his creation."20

"B-but I need god! He's the only one who can do this!"21

"Little do you know, that god sends power, allows consequenses, and creates solutions."22

"Okay." she replied terrified of the sins she had spoken just minutes ago.23

"Please I need my son back..." she bowwed her head in humility.24

"Please father," the angel prayed aloud, "I BEG of you, to allow this unfortunate earth-dweller her request. Bring her offspring back." he said quietly.25

...and so it was done.26

"Honey," she said agressively, with her index finger in the air, "I love you."27

THE END

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