Friends who lie, just get what they deserve!

The was once this young girl, her name was Moxie. Now this girl was a sweet young girl, or so her friend - Crystal thought. On a day just like today Moxie said to Crystal that she was not allowed to go to her party which Crystal was having tonight because it was halloween so she thought it would be a great idea to have a party with her mates. But when Crystal was out getting the stuff she needed for the party she saw her mate Moxie with their worst enemy. Crystal walked over to Moxie and London (their enemy) "Moxie can I talk to you right now" by this time Crystal was realy annoyed.1

"Umm.. yeah sure what's up Crystal?"2

"Why are you hanging out with London? When you said you where going up north to visit your dad?" 3

"What do you mean I'm just hanging out with her?" By this time Moxie was getting really worried.4

"Look Moxie I think we shoudln't be friends anymore." Crysrtal told Moxie while walking away.5

"Wait what? Crystal why are you saying this?" Moxie answered chasing after her.6

"Look Moxie I'm sick of you lying to me, it's best if we're not friends."7

"But i didn't do anything?" Shouting after Crystal8

By the time Moxie realised what Crystal ment, Crystal had already gone. When Moxie went to school the next day hoping to see Crystal there, so she could appologize to Crystal she realised that Crystal was not at school. Crystal's other friends told her that Crystal had moved away and was never coming back! Moxie was so upset she just started crying her eyes out. Then she realised that the party Crystal had the night before wasn't actually for halloween, it was her leaving party. 9

Two years later and Moxie had sadly died from depression. Unfortuantly she had never said sorry to Crystal and Crystal never heard about Moxie's death.10

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  • SpellCaster.KaYa
    November 3

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    ohh...

    It was sad at the end...

    But really gripping. Kept my interest all the way through~!!

    keep up the writing! Your stories are really good - unique!