Hearts Could Be Warmer - Prologue

This novel is about a inspirated female and male 'emo' students as juniors in high school. They all have a reason to die and a plan for sucicde. Yet Matt wants to find a brighter side to their dark horrific lives already lived.1

That may now be impossible since he has dissapeared.2

Without him they are falling apart. Becoming what they were before they met. All sucidal, all have the same take on life, all ready to pull the trigger, make a deep cut, take too much medicine and anythin else that would get them out of this world they've lived in for so long. 3

They now have to fight with their vampire 'brothers' and 'sisters' to find Matt, who has now fallen with the wrong croud of their kind and of others. But does he know who he really is? Is their someone else 'with him'? Controlling him? Maybe a Fallen Angel?4

Will he fight for the life forced behind or be controlled by the new 'him'?5

*This will be nothing like twilight. I promise*6

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  • CutsThatDontBleed
    November 24
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    So when are you going to write more? Or did you already? =)


    • SharayahO
      November 24
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      sorry. i havent been on in a while. I have some ideas so hopefully i'll put them up tonight.


  • Stellaqt2
    November 2
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    THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!!!!! ;D I THINK I WOULD LIKE 2 KNOW MORE ABOUT THE CHARACTERS.

  • CutsThatDontBleed
    November 1

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    Wow this was fantastic! I want to know more about the characters and I say that he should at first be controlled by his new self and then start realizing that his new way of thinking is wrong and try to fight back for his old life. ^w^ Great story! I really want to read more! Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest!!


  • Xxkitty-katxX
    November 1
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    hey, this sounds really really cool, you should go into detail with the characters

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