Salvation? Is it a word?

For salvation I looked to you
But you led me wrong
You knew it too
That's why I'm hearing the ding-dong
The bell so clear
At my burial site
No one else can hear
That's what frightens me.

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  • Paper.thin.paradox
    October 31

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    No one else can hear
    That's what frightens me

    Hm, so you're only dying to yourself, not others.
    They don't see what your going through.
    Or what the speaker is =P
    Great meaning. Powerful and absolutely loverly :]




    ~ Amy