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After a short nap I wake up in her body warmth. Kissing her neck below the ears and lightly biting her shoulder I force her to wake up. 4322
“Come on I have not had enough.” I whisper in her ears as she wakes. 4333
She wishes to continue her rest but in my lust and urgent need I force her to roll under me. 4344
Compelled her to lie on the bed without being able to move I reach under her neck with my left hand to grip her tightly. 4355
Plead and begs to be left alone.4366
With my free right hand I begin to apply pressure to twist and crumple her resisting palm and fingers, holding them within my finger grip; like matchsticks they melt and stretch to my will. 4377
She cries and I release her fingers and palm from my hand grip. 4388
Her hand does not attempt to resist my moves. 4399
Successful, I begin to rub and crush her molds and she says “You are a hungry wild animal with no shame or honor.” 44010
Unconcerned I then position myself to put all my weight on my left knee resting on the bed. 44111
With my body weight and pressure acting against her I push my right knee between her thighs. Struggles, but ultimately allows my right knee to settle between her legs. I then lift the left knee and straighten my left leg over her right leg. 44212
With my left hand I reaches down to push her right knee outwards as my left leg bends at the knee to finally take it place between her resisting thighs. Knowing she must yield to my powerful whims, she facilities me by opening her legs. 44313
Anger seems to play on her face and the soft nipples make me realize she is not ready to accept a natural and free entry.44414
Totally naked and captured, I let my hardened member seek its joy in the dry petals. Helped by my right hand grip I move the head with brute force testing the dry entrance. A few enforced passes, short thrusts to embed, stretch and wet the dry entrance. 44515
The anger on her face changes to joy mixed with fear as she begs me to be careful. 44616
I shout at her saying “Don’t ever resist my hunger and need, already you have awakened the beast in me that must now be satisfied.” 44717
She digs her nails in my shoulders and rages like a beast “I too can be beastly.”44818
In blind anger I try to enter but her tightness persists; each attempt to enter makes her body tremble. I let go the striker and bring up my right hand to wet my fingers with saliva reaching down to rub the thirsty opening. Wanting to cross the threshold, place the throbbing head in a clear seek and enter mode. 44919
My mouth suckles her right nipple as the right hand plays with her left nipple to crush and squeeze.45020
Slow pushes give me access as the quivering barriers expand to give me right of entry and the dryness begins to fade in her liquid joy. 45121
She lifts her hands to put them around my neck. 45222
Like a savage my body plays with her in surrendered compulsion. Invades deep into her privacy and I see her cry out in delightful ecstasy. 45323
I begin to tame her defiant posture by force, digging deeper and deeper with each penetration. 45424
Speed up my movements as her finger and nails nudge my back to move faster. Biting my chest repeatedly she makes me cry out and I repeatedly pound to make her suffer my enforced seduction.45525
To a point she accepts to be broken and then the hidden monster in her rises to confront her perpetrator. Cruelly digs her nails into my body, clamps her teeth to bite into my hairy skin.26
Re-bounces to each shove I take with an involuntary spasm from her love enslaved body.45627
Exposed we play with fire burning each other to the others joy till we reach climax moving in unison. 45728
Perspiration drops, our prized possession. 45829
In fused passion we disperse to rest.
Author notes
700 words aprox
A contest entry
- from the dark side. by Immortal Obscurity.
175 points, ended November 24, 2009, 10 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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After a short nap I -> nap, I
shoulder I -> shoulder, I
enough.” -> "enough,"
Compelled her to lie on the bed without being able to move -> compelling her to lie on the bed without being able to move,
Plead and begs to be left alone -> She pleads
Some more punctuation issues - all fixable.
I like this piece. Well done.

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Thanks for your comments.
Lol this is a part of my first ever story write. I really could not follow the 11000 word story with punctuations etc etc. The fun part for me is I want to continue to write is a s a novel.
Your suggestions are great. I know the story has a lot of mistakes and I expect you all to give suggestions.
This piece whose chosen for one had to fix a limit length of 1500 words.
Thanks for your comments. If you like kindly read my "Awakened" all 11000 words to be continued.
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