"I love you," I whispered to my beautiful wife lying next to me. 1
"I love you too," she answered. Suddenly, a flirtacious smile lit up her face. "Do you want to make love?" she asked me.2
I was automatically aroused when the words slipped out of her ruby red lips. To answer my stunning wife, I kissed her lips softly, begging her lips to open. She willingly did so and I let my tognue explore the hidden caverns of her mouth. 3
I ran my hands down her sides temptingly playing with her shirt. My hand traveled down to her waistband and I played with it, sliding my finger into it but pulling away quickly as I had begun. 4
"Please Daniel," she whispered, pulling away from our passionate kiss.5
"Not yet Katie," I said putting my fingers up to her lips. In a playful manner, she took my finger in her mouth and sucked skillfully. She bit it softly and released it, a cunning smile playing on her lips. 6
"You really are beautiful," I told her, softly stroking her light brown hair.7
I could tell she blushed, even in the candle light. She bit her lip and then stepped back. I was confused for a moment, but felt myself get bigger when I realized what she was doing. 8
Slowly but steadily, she took off her shirt, throwing it to the floor. She unhooked her bra and slowly let it fall of her body, landing to the floor with a silent thump. I watched with wide eyes as she stroked her own nipples. I wanted to help, but I realized she was testing my self-control, so I resisted. 9
She looked at me with eyebrows raised. "Want me now?" she asked softly, her blue eyes looking at me, passion burning in her eyes. 10
I sighed, struggling to control myself. I shook my head slowly. 11
Her perfect lips pouted and I laughed at my wife. "Well," she said slowly un-zipping her pants. "You know what that means..."12
I sure as hell did. She pulled over her pants and slowly stepped out of them, playing with the waistband on her lace panties. She brushed her hands on the outside of her pussy and she moaned. I watched in pure lust, unzipping my own zipper to reveal my growing penis. 13
"Oh Daniel," she moaned as she stroked herself steadily. She couldn't take it anymore. "You win," she said, pushing herself at me. I took her hungrily and immeditley pulled off her undies.14
I slid my hand in her wet pussy and played with her clit as she moaned loudly. She tried to concentrate to pull of my shirt, but she couldn't. To help her, I stopped and undressed myself completley. 15
She studied me and then leaped at me. Suddenly, we heard a timid knock at the door. Katie's eyes got wide as she leaped under the covers. I laughed at her and hurriedly pulled on my boxers and a T-shirt.16
Our little girl, Kate, pattered in clutching her old teddy bear. "I had a bad dream," she whimpered, running over to me. 17
"Oh darling," I said, picking her up. Luckily, she nestled into my so my wife had time to put clothes on. "It's okay," I said, stroking light brown hair, just like her mother. "You can sleep with us tonight."18
She nodded and I pulled her up with us, snuggling her in between Katie and me. She fell straight asleep. I watched my wife watching Kate and I knew I had all the things a man would ever need. "I love you," I whispered to my two sleeping girls.
Author notes
My first shot at erotica actually. Hope you enjoyed it Pixie! 
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Other than needing a small spellcheck, I think that this was sweet and sensual. The characters were realistic and the ending was cute. Very good for your first shot at erotica
Keep writing, good work
Thanks for entering the contest 
Pixie


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You did well at your first shot at erotica. Whew! (wiping sweat off my brow). Your characters felt real, not one dimensional. The beginning was very touching, and the ending was a splash of cold water.

The dialogue was smooth and realistic. Good going, keep writing.

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Did you think the actual erotic part of it was good?
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Oh yes, but I don't know about how explicit you want to be in your story, but a lot of people, mostly women I think, would rather have you hint at what the characters are doing. What I mean is,the imagination is a great thing and if you detail everything, then it takes a little something away from it, imagination isn't necessary. I don't know what the guys would like. Probably the more explicit.
But this is good and the erotic part is good. No doubt about it.
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awwwwwww!!!! that as really sweet!
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Thanks
Was it good for my first time writing erotica?
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yeah i liked it. it was sweet. keep it up. your good at it.
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Thanks a lot Suicidal! I just got off
so I think I might write another
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well, ill be waiting to read it. ^_~
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