The burning smell of hot waffles and coffee,
With a French topping of spring flowers
Open my eyes – still thirsty for sleep –
On this fresh morning, kissed
By the sun. 1
Joyful rays, like broken pieces of the sun’s window,
Descend, spreading through my room and
Dancing on my smiling lips. I can feel
Their golden shivers swimming on my skin,
Awaking my senses.2
I don’t want to stand up; there’s too much love
In the way the morning hugs the world,
Wrapping its shining arms around the Universe.
I feel it blooming inside me. Then you
Slowly open the door, giving this dream another path.3
You carry a plate to my bed, the perfect breakfast:
Hot waffles in the syrup of your eyes
With juicy love in every pigment of your skin;
And then the smell of coffee, like a forgotten surrender
Scattered through your rebellious hair. “My love,”4
You breathe over my raising hand, with a green voice,
While you caress my sleepy skin and kiss
My cherry cheeks, “My love, I hope you had a
Sunny night, with black and white rainbows and
Perfect dreams. Good morning!”
A contest entry
- Love & Romance ♥ Big Points ♥ by Lady Pixie.
1150 points, ended November 11, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is beautiful. I love your contrasting descriptions. Very sweet and well crafted.
~Mab

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Very sweet and visual... and I liked the unsual imagery. "Sunny night" "black and white rainbows" Very interesting, yet beautiful piece of work here.
I liked this very much
Thank you for entering the contest!

Pixie





