Angel walked Tyler to his car, just outside her home. After a quick kiss on the cheek, he was on his way. Leaving her alone to think over the time they had spent together, not even exchanging phone numbers.1
Angel didn't know what to do with herself now that this careless beauty was gone. The 24 hours that Tyler had been in her life, were the best 24 hours she had ever had. Not to mention the craziest.2
She walked back inside and decided to watch some T.V. After about twenty minutes, there was knock at her door.3
"Hello?" Angel answered the visitor before opening the door.4
"So you decided to answer with some clothes on this time?" Missy asked playfully.5
"Missy... I... uh... Hi." Angel mumbled, slightly embarrassed by the events of the night before.6
"Oh, still shy, I see." Missy responded, walking right inside and sitting down on the couch.7
Suddenly Angel realized that Missy had the same effect on her that Tyler had on her. Thoughts of licking every inch Missy's body, while having Missy return the favor, came to mind. 8
Missy seemed to notice the change Angel's body language, because she reached up and pulled Angel down onto her lap and kissed her forcefully on the lips.9
Angel's hands knew exactly what to do this time, she started undressing Missy, piece by piece.10
Her Shirt. 11
Her Skirt.12
Her Bra.13
And lastly, her panties.14
Angel was still fully clothed, staring at Missy's naked body. It was her turn to be in control. Her turn to pleasure Missy.15
Missy arched her back as Angel's fingers playfully pinched her tits, tongue sliding across the tip after each pinch. Missy started rubbing Angel's inner thigh, ever so slightly grazing her pussy with each rub.16
They couldn't help but grow wet, watching eachother's eyes glaze over with sexual anticipation. 17
"I want you, Angel. I NEED you." Missy whispered, allowing her lips to brush up against Angel's ear as she said this.18
"This is soooooo wrong, Missy, so NAUGHTY." Angel said, kissing her as soon she was through talking.19
"You're the only person who does it this good, Angel. Really... you're the only one." 20
Angel didn't say anything else, she slid her finger right into Missy's dripping wet pussy, exploring her way to her clit, and slowly rubbing in and out.21
Missy moaned and squirmed, repeating Angel's name as she came.
Author notes
Sorry this one kind of sucks...
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I don't doubt that it might be beneficial to both of us, but you're the one who needs the help. With your writing I mean. Lol
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lol
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Yeah, not your best. You need to build the heat more. Take us into Angel's mind as she strips Missy. How aroused is she getting? Is she getting hot? Are her nipples responding as she touches Missy's smooth skin? How does she feel when Missy kisses her? Does she feel it deep down in her belly?
Use the senses more, taste, touch, smells. And don't forget the emotions Angel feels. Discovering she is Bi should be somewhat of a surprise to her, no matter how pleasant it is. All that will add depth to your character and the scene as well.
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What the hell would I do without you? You seriously know your sex.
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Mmmm, it would be much easier to impart my knowledge to you in the flesh, so to speak. wink Lol
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Hahaha, I'm sure it would, but good luck with that.
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Entirely your choice. Just offering you a more "beneficial" option.
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I have feeling it'd be a LOT more beneficial to YOU.
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All kidding aside, you're a sweet girl and a good sport. You can go far with your writing. If I can help in any way, I'm happy to do so. Bob
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Thanks man.
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