More Than Life Itself

Life is short.
One day,
You'll close your eyes
And wonder where all
The years have gone. 1

You'll look in the mirror
And find your face
Full of wrinkles. 2

These wrinkles show
The life you lived,
All the memories
You created. 3

I want to be there,
Next to you,
Sharing them with you. 4

I don't want much
From this life.
I've only a simple dream,
And that's to be with you. 5

I love you. I love you. I love you...
More than life...
Itself.

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  • jasje
    November 1
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    wow like it


  • cuteandpsycho93
    October 30
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    touching

    the girl who inspired you is so lucky. great writing. great great great


  • Anam Cara
    October 30

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    Just came to you

    I liked it.
    The fifth and sixth paragraph or stanza, is how i feel right now about someone. I loved it. nicely written


  • Cowwy23
    October 30
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    W.O.W. wow. that is awesome


  • Lil-Princess-Yara
    October 30
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    mi corazon! i love you! i love you sooo much!

  • Angel07
    October 30

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    Realy sweet. I like it,it makes you think about your life a little more.
    Keep it up
    Angel

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