I faced her, her teeth were drawn and poised to strike at a death aiming position. I had to get out of her reach, but I couldn't. If I pivoted to the right, she had me, if I flipped to the left, she still had me in her lines eye. There was only one option left, charge full force head on.1
"You think you can win Silvia, but you can't, your little vampire hunters aren't here to have your back now. As of now, your just a little girl in over her head" the feral vampiress smiled at me, her powers now at their highest caliber.2
Obviously, she didn't know one little detail. I was no mere girl. I was her, well not exactly her, but one of her kind. I was a hybrid, part human part vampire, or dhamphir if you want a technical term. And, with the vampire strength within me, added to the human strength, I was a lethal weapon, actually more deadly than this infernal wretch ever thought of being. Not to mention the training I had undergone since childhood.3
"If you want some of this 'little girl' bitch, then bring it on!" I challenged. Readying myself for what could be a blood fest, I unsheathed my sword from it's scabbard. In the silver moonlight my sword glistened, the power emanating from my weapon fueled my senses to heighten to their maximum potential. Okay, well, here goes nothing.4
She charged at me first, releasing a battle cry that echoed throughout the meadow we resided our little battle in. Her claws were aimed at my neck, the typical rip-your-throat-out move all evil bitches like this vampire used.5
Swiftly, I dodged her claw's attack, and landed my blade onto her chest, slicing her open. Blood spattered in all directions. Smiling as she let out a pained scream, I felt it.6
The sun began climbing in the sky, its golden rays landing on us, bathing the night sky in beautiful dawn light.7
"Burn in hell hag" I laughed, and watched.8
The vampiress screamed out a shrilling cry. Eating at her skin viciously, searing her like a flame to a moth, the vampire erupted into intense flames as the sun wrapped her in his light. And, in an instant she was no more, nothing but a lifeless pile of ash.9
To Be Continued....
I would like to know, should I continue???
Comments
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Amazing!
Yes continue! Your imagination is increadable! I would love to see a love interest in here with Silvia. Over all, pretty flippen sweet!beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 4.
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This was... interesting, to say the least. I've heard of dhampires before, but mostly in vampire-werewolf crosses. Good writing and keep it up.


