Are their times you ever felt like breakdown?1
Not wanting to continue your everyday life2
Telling everything that everything alright3
Yet you’re ready enough to curl in a ball and cry4
And let life pass you by5
Or just because their times no one there to hear you cry6
Since they don’t give a f*** if you breakdown and cry7
As if you needs aren’t important enough for them to listen8
But you know better than to disappear9
To pretend that the world step for your needs10
Then breakdown and cry for everything that happened11
Just until the world ends12
Then slowly back to the world you just escape pretending that everything is alright13
Whipping always the tears that over flow your eyes and putting the smile just before going back14
Just until you want the world to stop and let you breakdown to cry15
This is how I feel these days. Since he’s been gone. Feeling trapped between two different worlds. Not trying to bring anyone down. Just disappearing so no one see’s me when I’m down. I know I can’t l
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Sad and emotional
i really liked this piece.It makes me want to breakdown and cry too. You wrote it well but watch out for grammar.
This poem reminds me of how my Mum used to write poems as a teenager. Although she wasnt very good at spelling or grammar, the emotion and paini put into the poem was enough to fill the mistakes. Your poem was full of passion, hurt and anger. I could really feel it and i think that's what poetry i all about: feeling.
So keep writing lovely poems and thankyou for allowing me the pleasure of reading it.
From TJ
beginning: 3, language: 1, plot: 2, ending: 3, characters: 2.
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You made me cry because I miss my BF etc.
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everything is going to be alright widline is here to help u such call me because i miss him to
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I wish I was able to come to school. I really miss him Alexia 
Your not the only one. I need to talk to you Really bad...
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