Touched for the very First Time!

Phyllis flew in from Charleston South Carolina
on Delta Airlines in the summer of 1978.
I was at the top of my game socially.
There was another young lady named Cheryl
who had caught my fancy.

Cheryl lived in Brooklyn New York.
She was a friend of my close friend Linda.
Linda was like family to me.
She was advanced for her age and was about
to marry another mutual friend of ours.

Anyway, Cheryl and I had got off to a great start.
She was a nice girl and was kind of sexy.
Yet there was something about her that made me hesitate.
Looking back I believe it was that I knew she wasn't
down to do the nasty.
I was a late bloomer and had no time for good girls.
I needed someone hot and sexy that had some experience
and wasn't afraid to get it on.

We all gathered over Linda's house that summer.
Her mother and father were the loveliest couple
you could ever meet.
They open their home to the young people.
There were frequent barbeque's and other
social gatherings held at their home.

They lived in Jamaica Queens,New York.
The neighborhood was pleasant at that
time with a suburban flavor to it.
Coming from inner city Brooklyn made
this seem light years away.

I felt at ease over Linda's house.
Her brother Ben was a real character.
She was three years his senior but
you would never know it.
Everyone called him punchie.
He was a real piece of work.
He was into everything.
The boy broke the ladies hearts
on a daily bases.
We hit it off pretty well from the start.
Punchie was always in the streets
so at first I only saw him in passing.

There was great excitement over Linda's
upcoming wedding.
This was the event of the year among
our close circles.
This special occasion also brought many
interesting family and friends all in one place.
That's how I met Phyllis.
She was Linda's first cousin.
Her daddy's niece.

As I mentioned earlier Cheryl and I were talking.
You know, trying to get something going that
resembled a relationship.
I knew a lot of women and was very popular.
Eventhough this was the case I was still a virgin.
I was nineteen and never had intercourse.
Many would have been surprised because
I knew how to disguise this awkward reality.

My greatest fear was getting a girl pregnant.
I had big plans for my young life and none
of them included a family.
I'd seen my parents and many others destroy
their chances for success and financial
independence.
That wasn't going to happen to me.

The year Linda got married I was mature enough
to experience sex.
I felt comfortable enough with contraceptives
to allow myself the pleasures I had denied for so long.
Ladies went in and out of Linda's parents house
like it was Grand Central Station.
I decided that I would play it cool and not
move too fast to get penned up by a relationship.

So I was very charming yet elusive with Cheryl.
Somehow she seem to like me playing hard to get.
I think she actually believed I was a good guy.
You know, not really interested in getting into her pants.
I allowed her to relish in this fantasy as I
strategized how I could get some loving and stay free.

We were all in the main living room talking and having fun.
People were coming in and out of the house as this was
a high time and the place to be.
The ladies out numbered the men about eight to one.
So I felt like I was in heaven.
In fact it almost seemed like I was alone
with a harem of women.

I was the new kid on the block and so I receive
a lot of female attention.
Linda was very outspoken and made a statement
when Cheryl left the room.
She looked over at me with those hypnotic eyes
of her and said with a sexy smirk,"Gerry you
know when you meet my cousin Phyllis you may
forget all about Cheryl.
Needless to say I was very intrigued.
My imagination soared as I became very
curious as to what her cousin was like.

On Saturday Linda's father asked if I would
go with him to meet Phyllis at Kennedy Airport.
I appeared to be helpful never letting on
that I was thrilled to get the chance to
meet this mysterious cousin alone.
My mind began constructing what I would say.
I wondered what she would look like.
I was ready for what ever.

Mister Smith and I arrived at the Airport
in about fifteen minutes.
We waited for about twenty more minutes
and the plane arrived.
My heart fluttered as though it knew this
would be a special moment in my life.

After about ten minutes she walked out the gateway.
There she was this enchanting vision of loveliness.
I was totally awestruck by her beauty.
She had a golden complexion with hazel eyes.
My heart leaped for joy as I tried to maintain
my cool at all cost.

Mister Smith approached her with me right at his side.
As he extended himself to greet her with a warm hug
I quickly went into action.
I noticed she had two bags which needed attending
and offered to take them for her.
She smiled as our eyes met and we both felt the thunder.
Lightening bolts shot through our bodies and we knew it was fate.

We were formally introduced and her uncle
immediately knew their was a connection
between us.
His face lite up giving an approving smile.
I was in ecstasy.

After picking up the rest of her bags
we got in his car and went home.
She sat up front with her uncle and
I was in the back seat.
There was this magical silence between
us as her uncle began talking about
the wedding and family.
Phyllis would give an occasional nod
or say yes or no.
Just small talk allowing him to carry
the conversation.

In the midst of that exchange was a
subtle communication between Phyllis
and I.
Words can't properly describe what
I'm saying.
You would have to be there to understand.

Anyway we arrived at the house and were
met by warm greeting of cheer.
Everyone was impressed by Phyllis beauty
style and class.
I had a chance to connect with her and
allowed her to get settled.

We talked here and there as I tried
to make myself scarce.
I did that to avoid Cheryl who I had
completely wrote off my list.
There was no Cheryl once I met Phyllis.

They say all is fair in love and war
and this was my attitude in this situation.
I could care less what anyone thought including
Cheryl.
She was a nice girl but I was stricken by the bug.
I was in no way responsible for what my heart
was feeling.

Later that evening all the gang decided to go
out to a movie.
Phyllis and I managed to elude the crowd.
She gave some excuse about being tired from
the trip.
I disappeared until I knew everyone was gone.
The only two left in the house were me and
Phyllis.
Linda's parents were there but the house was
big enough where they wouldn't be a problem.
Besides they were old folk and went to bed early.

Phyllis and I got the perfect opportunity to
chat.
We talked about school,family,Linda's wedding
and of course each other.
We were in a dimension of enchantment.
The world seem to stop and nothing else
was more important at that particular time
and place.

As we got more acquainted I became more relaxed
and before long we were french kissing.
The sparks flew in every direction as our
tongues entwined.
Her mouth was sweet as honey.
My temperature rose and my penis throbbed.
I could hear both our hearts pounding
as we embraced breast to chest.

The kissing escalated into feeling and
touching sexual parts.
We did everything but have actual intercourse
that night.
I was invited to stay the night but had to
go back home.
I left before the gang came back as to not
let on that we were in love.
It was torture leaving her.
We looked into each others eyes as if
we were already married.
I was in a trance as I travelled about
an hour and a half trip back home.

The next morning I arrived at Linda's
house in the early afternoon.
Although we both played it cool the secret
was out.
Phyllis and I was the gossip of the day.
Poor Cheryl was pushed completely out of
the picture.
To my surprise she bowed out gracefully
not making a scene or even challenging me
on my decision.
As quick as the gossip started it descended
into best wishes for the new handsome couple.
I was delighted that all the stuff was over
and now we were free to continue this romance.

The house was filled all day with well wishers
and family members all coming to congratulate
Linda on her wedding.
Finally in the late afternoon everyone had
left the house.
By some miracle Phyllis and I found ourselves
alone.
We immediately took off where we left off
the night before.

Things quickly got hot and heavy and it happened.
Of all places destiny had placed us in her aunt
and uncles bedroom.
We were looking a Linda's wedding gown then we
started kissing and touching again.
Before we knew it we were rolling on Linda's
parents bed.
Then clothes went down and pants went open
and things came out and stuff went in and
we were making love.

A thousand images went through my head at
the speed of light.
I had no protection and we were in the
land of no return.
She whispered in my ear sensual and erotic
things that urged me on.
Her sacred chambers were warm and juicy.
My penis was deep inside her core and my
body was on fire.
My heart raced out of control and then
we went to the next level and it
slowly began to beat more normally.

I looked into her eyes and we both
smiled.
Those eyes! Those wonderful hazel jewels.
What beauty! What magic.
I was sprung!

We chanted I love yew's in simultaneous
melodies.
Tongues danced as bodies oscillated in
passionate heat.
Eyes closed as volcanic eruptions were
fast on the horizon.
Then it happened we both came together
with one joyful outburst of rapturous bliss.
The love juices flowed from my pulsating
erection like the fountain of youth.
I had made love for the very first time
and it was an unforgettable experience.

We continue to copulate in rapturous bliss
for two weeks.
She was suppose to leave after the wedding
but something unexpected came up!

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  • R S Adams Jr
    May 28, 2008
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    strike me pink, mate...

    ...this is fantastic...a dream come true and what a way to go. Yahoo! Brought back vague memories.

    The very first time is an unforgettable experience, but you went on for another fortnight. Lucky bloke.

    Oh, the technicalities of the story?...good, I enjoyed the read...but wow! it was the imagery that got me. Ha!...and that last line is bloody funny.


  • Zaltania
    November 20, 2005
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    Wow. Great work. Absolutely amazing. I loved it. It's so sensual, erotic and full of passion and love. You are truly an amazing writer Keep up the great work
    PassionFlower

  • Pamela A Lamppa
    November 19, 2005
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    Very Well Done

    Yup. You said it was a winner and guess what? You were right. You certainly can turn a page as well as the young lady's eye. LOL. Well done. Congratulations. Keep writing, creating, and experimenting. The more you write the better the words flow. GREAT work here my friend. ~Pam

  • olddrivelandrubbish
    November 13, 2005
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    mmmmmmmidle

    captivating... but some of your language made me squint in cheezyness
    at least it created a responce though
    after all
    True morality implies a tolerance for other attitudes and modes of life, not necessarily an endorsement of them. The major immorality is in insisting (by coercion blackmail, or law) that others live and think as you do.
    so go on cheezmunger and spreed your seed

  • Diamond
    November 12, 2005
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    CONGRATULATIONS! on your much deserved win Darell. You're a stunning and brilliant writer and it showed so well in this story. It was brilliant, captivating and pleasurable to read. Avril

  • LaMerci
    November 11, 2005
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    I had been trying to get to this poem for days. Finally today I copied and pasted it so I could read it and it made me wanna hollah! Ouuuuwwwwwwwuu! That's all I can say in here.

  • Irilis4u
    November 10, 2005
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    wow

    WOW, Darell what a beautiful story, excellent, excellent job! I loved it, it was exactly what I was looking for, and I know I can say this to you now, congratulations on winning first place, I was actually going to give it to somone else before I read this, great job. I loved these lines,"Then clothes went down and pants went open
    and things came out and stuff went in and
    we were making love."
    Very descriptive, excellent work.
    Irilis
    ps,
    what unexpected thing happend!!!!!!!!!???????? lol

    Edited on Nov 10, 9:23 p.m. because 'of typo'.


  • nisesunshine
    November 9, 2005
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    beautiful piece. man, i'm anxious to read more, i know there's a part two right? wow, i've never heard the guys point of view of his first time so, beautiful and in depth like this. i could see the whole thing- from your first time meeting her at the airport, to the first time you kissed her. all i can say is wow, i'm in awe. i really expect to see a part two soon. please? but that was a beautiful piece, i'm sure if she seen that she would be very bashful but grateful that she had that special occassion with you. great job, hope you win.


  • November 9, 2005
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    Erotic & Sensual

    Oh my goodness darell!!!! This is amazingly good. It was HOT my dear friend! Okay now, someone turned off the A/C or what?? Phew... It is hot in here! lol I really like the story... Very romantic, sensual, erotic and passionate. I really loved it! Thank you for the wonderful gift of your erotic pen my friend!
    ~Elba


  • Mylovemyhurt
    November 9, 2005
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    emotional and sensual

    i really like the way u express it its very passonite

  • grannyeri
    November 9, 2005
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    Do you have anay idea how long it took to read this to get to the good parts? LOL - a great write, makes one wants to read more.

  • Diamond
    November 8, 2005
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    Wondefully Relived!

    WOW what an exhilerating story and a wonderful way to experience your first sexual experience. You had me completely glued to the screen wondering waiting to see what was to transpire between you and Phyllis. I'm sure she can recall the events as clearly as you have. Something as special as you both shared can't be forgotten that easily. A very romantic, intriguing, sexualy and passionate story. I really enjoyed every moment of it and best of luck in the contest. Avril

  • meena krish
    November 8, 2005
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    WOW...sweet, passionate and very romantic. Loved it, the story unfolded beautifully building up to that wonderful expereince Good luck in the contest.
    Take care~

  • WishMeAway--x
    November 8, 2005
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    this is was beautiful! are you married to her now? just curious?!?!?!?! i am surprised you were able to remember something like this~but i guess if it was that special...i wouldn't know i am only sixteen and still a virgin! so yeah! again this is great!~LUVS~MOONY~


  • Celticmoon
    November 8, 2005
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    What a wonderful expression of your very first time of love making. A most beautiful experience that surely has been branded in your memeory for an eternity. An amzing memory to be able to hold on to for a lifetime.

    Well Done!

    Blessings
    celticmoon

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