Today is just another tragedy

Don't look at me,
But you can't look away,
You mouth is full of words,
You want to leave but you stay,
Today is just another tragedy,
My breath is catching up with me,
I scream willingly,1

Today is another tragedy,
Go away,
No please stay,
Can I have you,
But I need to leave you,
Should have left you yesterday,2

Your eyes are piercing now,
With words I cannot verbalize,
My mouth is dry,
My arms are limp by my side,
Today is just another Tragedy,
My breath is catching up with me,
I Scream willingly,3

Today is another tragedy,
Go away,
No please stay,
Can I have you,
But I need to leave you,
Should have left you yesterday

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  • Black luv Neon
    October 30
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    AMAZIN=] I LUV IT


  • Rorshach gold member
    October 30

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    The lines 'today is another tragedy' are rather good. It has a flow, and says a lot in just four words. real poetry there, in my opinion.
    Come to think of it, they would be a good title to a song, and that's a good thing.


  • SCREAMxTOxxBExHEARD
    October 29

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    This is good I like it