First Time

Driving down the road1

Up to my buddy's place2

Some guy was speeding past3

We decided to race4

You gave me a cookie5

Said it was "organic"6

It was already in my system7

So when the pipe came out I didn't panic8

I wasn't sure I wanted to9

Said I didn't know how10

Steve put his arm around me,11

Lit the lighter and said, "Breathe in, now!"12

I took a deep breath13

And held as long as I could14

You asked "try again?"15

And I said I would16

I didn't get high17

It was my first time18

But now I'm a stoner19

And that's the end of this rhyme20

Author notes

Lol yeah so this was my first. The "you" I refer to was my boyfriend at the time. We actually broke up because of it. I was "the good girl" and I told him if he made me smoke it was over and his reply was "Well, I did have fun with you but everything has got to end... at least it ended well." So I was like fine I'll do it you prick. LOL

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  • Cutiewithanicebooty
    March 14, 2007
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    I kinda

    I kinds liked this no I really liked this it was great


  • hollisterbabe
    March 13, 2007
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    HAHAHA thats funny kinda over all its really good

  • King Bongmaster
    January 1, 2006
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    Great Poem You really broke it down. Your first time just like you would tell it if someone were to ask you. Good Job

  • purplebubbles
    November 24, 2005
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    he he he he he
    nice one
    woot weedness
    anywho
    ciao
    great poem btw. u can tell im not in a grt mood
    but yeah first times are always weird!


  • Kyleen
    November 17, 2005
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    Yah. I didn't get high my first couple of times. So I stopped trying. This was awesome. I love how it flows. It rhymes so good and it's so smoothe, like you still have your mind. Good luck in the contest.

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