this is my story. this is not a biography, or some other fucked tale of love and happiness. No, my story is about how i got here. In the stand. Pleading for my life.1
(awesome music is playing)2
It all began when i first saw him, a god amoung the mortals. i knew at that moment that he was for me and nothing would get in my way, becaused i loved him. That night, I left my window open in case he might desend upon me while i slept. He did, but in ways i did not expect.3
I open my eyes to see him on top of me. Covering my mouth with his hand, and his other hand going down my shorts. His fingers knew right where to go. i moan in aganizing pleasure as i freed his straining cock from his binding pants. That night i lost all innocence i had left.4
The next day, he wouldn't leave me alone. Begging me to go with him, pleading me, scaring me. i no longer loved him, because of the bruises and cuts he left me last night. i wouldn't go with him so he became my stalker.5
Day, and night he would follow me. Never leaving me alone. i felt trapped, and one day i lashed out. He became violent. Screaming and hurting me. i had enough. 6
No, i did not kill him. But, i was there when he died. They say i did it, i pushed him off the cliff. They say i was insane. But they dont know the truth. As he fell, i felt an aching pain in my chest, that i did not reconize. It was the pain of losing someone dearly, the pain of a broken heart.
A contest entry
- Give me a story to go with the title. by DewDrop.
350 points, ended November 20, 6 entries
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Good start for something bigger.
The only thing that bothered me was you forgot to use the capital I.
Well done.
beginning: 3, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, characters: 3.
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this could be a great start to a story, a very good story so far, try to add some detail, make it less confusing
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This could be the prologue of a great story to come! I love it and great job!
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Give us more detauil, some more diolage and this could be awsome, its just too jumpy and needs more expalinations.
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This was very good, I wish you would have made it a little bit longer, but I loved it none the less. Great job, and thanks for entering,
Dew
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