I wish there was something I could do1
Something I could say2
To make you listen...3
I know that our past is rough4
But isn't there something I can do?5
For you? 6
For me?7
This path you're taking isn't right8
Shouldn't you know better?9
Apparently not...10
Letting icons get in the way11
You think you're so cool12
You ask me what I'm doing,13
And I'll say I'm living14
How about you?15
Are you living?16
Living for every joint?17
Why, babe, why?!18
You're so much smarter than that!19
I'm losing a great friend20
Who taught me that it's okay to laugh21
About dumb stuff22
To be amazed at the simplest of things23
You're a great person...24
But why, why?25
Why are you doing this?26
To you27
To me! 28
Stop!29
Please, I'm begging you!30
Live life the right way again31
Live life for me32
So I know you're okay33
Just please don't live life for the next joint34
Please...35
I wish there was more I could do,36
But you're so far away37
I wish... 38
For me, my annoying twin brother, for me...
Author notes
This was written for one of my closest friend Corey, who isn't so close anymore. I wish he were listening... But I doubt he is.
In a list
Not sure what to say... So I won't.
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this is exactly how i felt about a friend
i think its time to let go..
well done thou (:
-Missi
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Possibly, or maybe I'm blinded by our past so it makes me feel this way. I'm not totally heartless, ya know.
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Yes however the past is nothing but pain. If a person cant help themself they can never really help you
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I think you did a great job of expressing what it feels like to lose a friend and watch someone you care about "destroy" themselves.
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It's always sad to lose a friend. But you expressed this very well here. thanks for sharing.
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