Happy Birthday Dad, Here are my memories.

Burn the cig out on my arm,
Just never do them any harm.
Take my head and bash it in,
But do not touch their fragile skin.
If ever you need to lift a hand,
Beat me down right where I stand.
When they make you feel the hate,
Crack my head with a stainless steel plate.
When you feel they need to hurt,
Hit me hard, from them, avert.
Throw every name to me as a diss,
But never harm my little sis.
When you feel you cannot pass,
Just look at me and kick my ass.
Put the cigar on my arm let it burn,
Just never give my sister's a turn.
For I love them more than my own life,
So kick my ass, hell use a knife.
When the urge to hurt is there,
Take it out on me, I do not care.
If you feel the need to fight,
Just beat on me, I'll be alright.
When they are getting in deeper mud,
Swing at me, even draw some blood.
When they start to misbehave,
Slap me down, right to my grave.
If they throw you in the dirt,
Beat me hard, and make it hurt.
Even though we said goodbye,
If you hit them, you will die.
Raise a finger to them if you will,
But then I might just have to kill.
So think real hard when you are ticked,
For one day, it will be your ass that is kicked.1

To you on your birthday, I wish you well,
Have a great life, I will see you in hell.

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  • Bernice DeLucchi gold member
    November 3

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    Whew .... this is an angry poem; each word and sentence screams with a seething hate! I cringed with each word I read. It is a really powerful piece which I'm sure is true ... otherwise it wouldn't have made me feel the emotions I experienced when reading this!


    • Upoiuoisjcokmi
      November 3
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      It was a true poem, you got that part right, lol. Thanks for the comment and applaud


  • seamus gold member
    November 2

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    Bitter

    Sure hope this isn't your bio. It seethes with anger, pain and it was hard for me to read. Although I admire the stand he has taken regarding the welfare of his sisters, his ultimate solution may not prove to be user friendly, better to contact the authorities.

    • Upoiuoisjcokmi
      November 2

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      Very true story. And I have not actually layed a finger on him, but if he hits one of them, I will. Gladly, too.


  • Much-Dipstick
    October 29

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    Very good work Ron, very sorry to read it and hear about it, it was difficult. But I'm glad you were strong enough to protect your family you're a good man, Ron, don't say you aren't cause you know I won't beleive it.

  • Angel07
    October 29
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    So sad. no one should have to live through it but you did to protect your sisters.
    Angel


  • dragonsdemise
    October 28
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    hey ronnie, this was good
    i know i can relate cos my dad used to beat me up too.
    we're all on the same journey i guess.
    keep it up


  • Cocoly Docolies
    October 28

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    aww! that must have been tough living through beatings!
    You are really sweet and I wish your sister a good life without beatings


  • PurpleScene.
    October 28
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    Oh my gawd! Ronnie this is deep and sad.
    You're very strong and sweet I envy you.

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