Remembering the warm summer, how fast it went and how fast my love grew for the boy you stole my heart. His brown eyes, pale skin, light pink lips and hair the color of deep brown tree oak, still fresh in my head. His warm seductive kisses and his touch that still tingles on my think tan skin. My hair the color of a shadow black, eyes green like a cat and high cheek bones like a model. 1
When it was time to say goodbye, it wasn't sad but still made me yearn for him to hold me again. My heart felt like it was knocking on my chest, my breath just caught in my throat. Hearing the final words that I feared all summer, I never even got his name. One day I knew we'd meet again...2
School was starting again and I was ready for everything that high school would throw at me. I knew things would be different, mostly since I was a senior now. Mostly since I'd never forget that boy, Mostly since he's always on my mind. Wishing he'd come around, look for me.3
As I walked in school, I saw some of my old friends. Smiling, I walked to them. They smiled back and pointed behind me. I gave them a confused look, my heart pounding, just hoping it would be that boy but instead I turned around to see my brother, who was now a freshman. I sighed and he snorted at my clothes. I wore a red sweatshirt that said "I get away with the boys in the band" and ripped faded blue jeans, with black and red checkered vans.4
I glared, my hand smacking the back of his head. He snarled in disgust. I smirked and walked to my friends again. They just laughed and I sighed in embarrassment. I turned to my brother once again and let my eyes narrowed at him.5
His eyes the color of deep blue water, scruffy black hair and chubby cheeks. Baby fat he says but I knew he had to lay off the Twinkies. "Now look, you better leave me alone. Unless you want me to get the football team to throw you in a garbage can? That can always be arranged." I snapped and I watched his eyes grow wide with fear. Sharply turning around and to my locker.6
My friends crowding around me, just laughing their asses off. I just ignored them all. Thinking about how I use to be the freshman, how the upperclassmen tormented me. I didn't want to be like them. Remembering how I had to fight to be on top. Literally.7
'Hit her again!'
'you wants some more girly?'
'Make her bleed!'8
I shook off the memories. It's time to make a new. This is my life and this is my year. I smiled and walked into my class and stopped in my tracks. There he was. Perfectly sitting in the back, not even looking up, he continued to write something in his journal.9
I sat in the front, unfortunately the only seat left. Sighing I opened up my Math text book and math journal. 10
"Okay class, welcome to your first day back to high school seniors! Today, we are just going to learn more about each other because we have some new people. Go on." Mr. Jacobs chirped and everybody slowly stood up to talk around. Searching, I saw him talking to Nina Lerner, the most popular girl in the school.11
I sighed and walked over. She gave me a sneer and I sneered right back. Giving him a smile, I winked at him. "Nina, if you don't mind, I don't want you to flirt with my boyfriend." I declared. her jaw dropped and was speechless. Finally stomping away, I begun to laugh.12
He just looked at me in confusion. "Do I know you?" Escaped his lips and I blinked in total shock.13
"Don't you remember me? I'm that girl from summer sleep away beach camp!" I explained and he just shrugged. Hurt, I took a small step back. Then I looked closer, same face and everything but different color of eyes and had a small scar on his face.14
"You must be inferring to my twin brother." He suddenly answered and I slowly nodded.
Then out of nowhere, a hand flew to my shoulder and spun me around. There he was. Pulling me into a deep hug, his lips pressed against mine. The warmth and peace to it shocked my body to life.15
"Your here!" I yelped when he pulled away from the kiss. He nodded and his face was calm and warm.16
"It's so good to see you again Maddie!" He laughed. he knew my name but I didn't know his? How sad.17
"Um...I never did catch your name." I whispered.18
"My name is Matt. And my brother's name is William." He answered. I nodded and smiled. Finally, after an awkward silence, Matt pulled me out of the class once the bell rang. Lunch time already. 19
Pulling me into a janitor's closet where something happened that I never thought would happen. His lips collided with mine, his hands everywhere and finally pulling off our clothes. Like 45 minutes in heaven but better.20
His bare skin, pressed to mine and heat mixing in between us was like magic. In and out. In and out. Moaning and groaning. His tongue licking every inch of my skin. In and out. In and out. Touch. Taste. Lick. Touch. Bite. Moan. Groan. All going so fast. The heat overwhelming.21
When it was over, I changed. I was a new person...22
When it was time to say goodbye, it wasn't sad but still made me yearn for him to hold me again. My heart felt like it was knocking on my chest, my breath just caught in my throat. Hearing the final words that I feared all summer, I never even got his name. One day I knew we'd meet again...2
School was starting again and I was ready for everything that high school would throw at me. I knew things would be different, mostly since I was a senior now. Mostly since I'd never forget that boy, Mostly since he's always on my mind. Wishing he'd come around, look for me.3
As I walked in school, I saw some of my old friends. Smiling, I walked to them. They smiled back and pointed behind me. I gave them a confused look, my heart pounding, just hoping it would be that boy but instead I turned around to see my brother, who was now a freshman. I sighed and he snorted at my clothes. I wore a red sweatshirt that said "I get away with the boys in the band" and ripped faded blue jeans, with black and red checkered vans.4
I glared, my hand smacking the back of his head. He snarled in disgust. I smirked and walked to my friends again. They just laughed and I sighed in embarrassment. I turned to my brother once again and let my eyes narrowed at him.5
His eyes the color of deep blue water, scruffy black hair and chubby cheeks. Baby fat he says but I knew he had to lay off the Twinkies. "Now look, you better leave me alone. Unless you want me to get the football team to throw you in a garbage can? That can always be arranged." I snapped and I watched his eyes grow wide with fear. Sharply turning around and to my locker.6
My friends crowding around me, just laughing their asses off. I just ignored them all. Thinking about how I use to be the freshman, how the upperclassmen tormented me. I didn't want to be like them. Remembering how I had to fight to be on top. Literally.7
'Hit her again!'
'you wants some more girly?'
'Make her bleed!'8
I shook off the memories. It's time to make a new. This is my life and this is my year. I smiled and walked into my class and stopped in my tracks. There he was. Perfectly sitting in the back, not even looking up, he continued to write something in his journal.9
I sat in the front, unfortunately the only seat left. Sighing I opened up my Math text book and math journal. 10
"Okay class, welcome to your first day back to high school seniors! Today, we are just going to learn more about each other because we have some new people. Go on." Mr. Jacobs chirped and everybody slowly stood up to talk around. Searching, I saw him talking to Nina Lerner, the most popular girl in the school.11
I sighed and walked over. She gave me a sneer and I sneered right back. Giving him a smile, I winked at him. "Nina, if you don't mind, I don't want you to flirt with my boyfriend." I declared. her jaw dropped and was speechless. Finally stomping away, I begun to laugh.12
He just looked at me in confusion. "Do I know you?" Escaped his lips and I blinked in total shock.13
"Don't you remember me? I'm that girl from summer sleep away beach camp!" I explained and he just shrugged. Hurt, I took a small step back. Then I looked closer, same face and everything but different color of eyes and had a small scar on his face.14
"You must be inferring to my twin brother." He suddenly answered and I slowly nodded.
Then out of nowhere, a hand flew to my shoulder and spun me around. There he was. Pulling me into a deep hug, his lips pressed against mine. The warmth and peace to it shocked my body to life.15
"Your here!" I yelped when he pulled away from the kiss. He nodded and his face was calm and warm.16
"It's so good to see you again Maddie!" He laughed. he knew my name but I didn't know his? How sad.17
"Um...I never did catch your name." I whispered.18
"My name is Matt. And my brother's name is William." He answered. I nodded and smiled. Finally, after an awkward silence, Matt pulled me out of the class once the bell rang. Lunch time already. 19
Pulling me into a janitor's closet where something happened that I never thought would happen. His lips collided with mine, his hands everywhere and finally pulling off our clothes. Like 45 minutes in heaven but better.20
His bare skin, pressed to mine and heat mixing in between us was like magic. In and out. In and out. Moaning and groaning. His tongue licking every inch of my skin. In and out. In and out. Touch. Taste. Lick. Touch. Bite. Moan. Groan. All going so fast. The heat overwhelming.21
When it was over, I changed. I was a new person...22
Author notes
Songs that inspired my love story:
"I will not bow" Breaking Benjamin
"Stab my back" All American rejects
"One time" Justin Bieber
"Bully" Three days Grace
"Last to know" Three days grace
"Earth to Bella part 1" Incubus
"My World" SR-71
"Umbrella" Rhianna
"Push up on it" Rhianna
I know it's not much but that's all I could think of! I bet it won't win but I tried!!! I hope you enjoy!!!
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Actually I thought that this was good
a very cute tale of a first love perhaps and it was nicely detailed. 
Hope you don't mind, but I have a couple of suggestions for some places that I noticed with small errors that are easily fixed:
P1: Remembering the warm summer, how fast it went and how fast my love grew for the boy you stole my heart.
I think you meant 'who' (not you) after boy
P12: Finally stomping away, I begun to laugh.
this sentence could confuse readers in my opinion. Is the narrator stomping away, or is Nina? I would suggest re-wording a little.. but it's only a suggestion/my opinion. Also, I believe it should be 'began' instead of 'begun'. Maybe you could slighly re-word it to read more like 'Finally, she stomped away and I began to laugh.' Only a suggestion, though
P15: "You must be inferring to my twin brother."
'inferring' would be the wrong definition here in this sentence I think.
I think you meant referring??
P16: "Your here!"
You're
Overall, I really did like this- it was sweet, sentimental, passiontal and loving.
I liked the characterization you put into this as well
I think you did an excellent job
Thank you for entering the contest!!
Pixie




