I wrote this when I was 6 and a half years old XD

My name is Paul I am 4 years old one night my mommy and daddy left to go see a movie i was left alone with my babysitter she was really nice we played twister and momople and other fun games it was really fun to play these games with her and i never wanted mommy and daddy to come back home because then i would have to go to sleep but mommy and daddy did come back home and i did go to sleep but mommy told me i could see my babysitter tomorrow too that made me very happy

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Pickles.
>.> I do not think I knew how to use a period XD >.> I did, I just never used them, untill My grade two teacher told me I had to XD

I may have edited one or two things >.> I tried not to XD

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  • NarniaKid
    November 7

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    Haha! This is cute

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  • Raining.Fire
    October 28

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    coolio.... though, I am taking off points cause ya edited a little.... I know, it's hard!!!! lol.... this is cute! lol


    • The Insane Eraser silver member
      October 28
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      v.v...and if you do promote my novel, please do Blood & Magick, it is way better...and I only edited a word...maybe two...It was my word document...it made me DX


  • Cocoly Docolies
    October 28
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    haha this is so cute! good job lol

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