This is the short chronicle of Sero female god of neutral, first female god of the ten. This chronicle was first written by Liarle journal men of Sero. Sero always wanted to be a member of the ten she knew that in order for this to happen that she was going to have to change the laws of the gods for no female god was a member of the ten and they said that it wasn’t aloud for fear that they would hold to much power. She was finally able to get there intention and they said if she was able to pass all the tests that she could become one of the ten. The chronicle will now begin.1
It was my lords first test to become a member of the ten. She was dressed in a wonderful dark blue and gold robe made by the finest silks men of the gods and it was some of his best work.2
She wears strong black boots made of leather and crow feathers. Her long black hair falling down her back to the bottom of her knees an inch or so at the end were blond. She had one of the most treasured faces among the gods. As I write I hear a member of the ten talking.3
“Now Sero there are three fighting tests we will do one now and the rest later. Right. Now we’ll start with your first test. You will have to fight a phoenix dragon.”4
Author notes
this is a short story a side story of ahetn
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The story starts off well and then the remainder will define the comments that I can give for this essay it is good..the tense veers off towards the present in the last two paras..
Shubs
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thank you its not done yet and i dont have the rest with me right now to add but when i up date it ill tell you thank you and talk to you later
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This is easy to read and understand, even if I am not a sceince fiction or fantasy fan - well written.
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