Reign of Dragora I: Dilemma of Mavolus

Mavolus started when his wife Nargia got up and walked out of the room, Unaware that this would be his last time to see her alive. 1

Later that morning as he got out of bed, and he walked outside, standing out amongst the desert sands and harsh desert sun, he longed dearly for his wife, who had gotten up so early to go to the home of the Draka, Cybillus, the land of forest, to make peace with the calm Draka. 2

What he didn't know was that here, in the land of fire, in the capital of the entire world of Dragora, tragedy was about to unfold. 3

It started at about noon, with a cry from the center of town. 4

Mavolus saw the creatures of Drakkas, the Darka roll through town and in their aftermath, Mavolus saw the trampled body of his wife Nargia.5

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Mavolus screamed.6

*not finished yet*7

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