Happily Ever After

(One two three hold your breath) Kneel for confession because Christ your savior has come. (one two three) sinking lower and lower she goes into the water--he has come has come. (One two three) I see them moving around me while I am come undone. One two three one two three one two three what's stopping me?1

His face turned blue. The broken rims of his glasses shined in the bright light of the moon.2

The ghost of the girl she thought she knew...gripped his head as he struggled to gasp for air.3

I don't care. I don't care. It's not like you deserved me. Now let me take it back for the both of us.4

Her grip released. He was still for a moment. It was just long enough for him though. She bit her tongue as the sharp knife collided with her arm. It wasn't hard for her to regain her balance, yet too late. 5

He pushed her onto the grass, with his knife to her throat he swore and screamed. 'This is it' she thought before it went black.6

Molly clutched the trigger. 'That's the last time...' her heart pounded in her chest. It was like an earthquake. He turned the corner to her bolted door. 'I'm going to kill you bitch!' he screamed pounding his fists on the walls. 'I'm going to fucking kill her!' He sounded drunk as usual 'How'd I ever end up with a son of a bitch like you.' she turned the gun to her neck and looked up into the ceiling, at first it was like relief. the shotgun fired and the room turned the corner....Brandon looked down at her and almost as fast as he lost it he was on his knees sobbing...He wiped his eye and that was when he decided that there was nothing left in the world for him, for his children, for his wife.7

This time Jess climbed the rocky cliff alone. Jeff was alone and he liked that. He climbed to the top and kicked over some stones. Up ahead a little ways was a shallow cave. He staggered towards it with only one goal in mind. It was almost night when he lit the fire, and in the darkness he saw what the world must look like through the dirt and shade, it felt so ugly to be here.. It happened in one sudden instant. He was not prepared for what the man held in his hands. 'Hey!' the man yelled 'Hey kid what are you doing here?" He was holding a torch that shimmered in the cold which caused him to stutter. 'Hey carrot top...look you've got some issues with life...we all do. Will you do something special for me?'8

Molly Anne Diamond woke up in a hospital with a bruised forehead and cuts across her arms. She was wrapped in bandages. "' I'm still alive?' she sighed to herself. 'What a relief '...the doctor came into the room and handed her a sheet of paper. Miss Diamond, you're a lucky woman to be alive.9

We're preparing a report on the incident....please write to the best of your ability and don't forget to sign. He smiled a white smile that sent shivers to her spine. How the hell she made it was a puzzle. I don't deserve this she said to herself in a low whisper. Then she pulled the pen from the clipboard and barely read before she signed away the will to her family estate.10

Jess was so filled with amazement. In one instant he had been ready to throw in the towel and now he had all he ever wanted or needed. Tim smiled a crooked smile as Jess shoveled the dirt over the body bag. "You see! Luck has a way of turning itself around. Now I've got a son and you've got your gold." Tim kicked a stone into the huge ditch. 'She wasn't cruel enough to live in this world' Tim half laughed before he spit his snuff out into the pile.11

More murders. Half a dozen bodies now scattered beneath the earth. This time the old man dug, Jess was out preying--feeding--killing. He did it for power, for glory, for game. It was nearly two years after the old man rescued Jess from his eternal damnation and Jess sat atop his goldmine. It was a happily ever after.

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  • Queen Mab gold member
    November 11, 2009

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    Oh wow. So many stories in so few words. But the overlaying plot comes together perfectly. Very well written. I'm impressed.

    ~Mab


  • Namine Ritsu
    November 1, 2009

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    I loved this. The description and mood were awesome!~

    And the title of the story really does meet the ending's standards. I loved this. *repeats self* 8D

    Thank you for entering~

  • Marta. gold member
    October 29, 2009

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    Interesting. Strange and quirky. a good read for sure, and thanks for sharing.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.