Daydream

Underneath you, 1

the world is diverse.2

The night sky glitters with3

millions of tiny stars that 4

make light above us.5

I overlook any doubts and6

let myself go. 7

Our naked bodies glide together8

as I enter you gently.9

You gasp and moan.10

I want to be deep in you,11

sliding in and out furiously.12

I need you to quench this fire13

that I have been carrying.14

I look into your eyes15

filled with lust and passion.16

I hold you and touch you17

Wanting to remember18

everything about you.19

This moment will not be 20

forever, but I want to remember 21

your expressions and every sound 22

that escapes your mouth.23

pleasure intensifies24

and I feel my body go numb.25

I explode deep inside of me26

giving me the joy of feeling27

My warmth flow inside of me.28

You lift your body taking your29

weight off me, freeing me from30

your wonderful confinement. 31

I capture you nicely and secretly32

I want to beg you to stay inside of you. 33

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  • line shakes
    February 15, 2006
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    suddenly..i feel so hollow...like a complete state of emptiness.
    "I want to beg you to stay inside of you".... "i would have beg him to stay inside of me"...very nice piece...beautiful like a body of water shimmering under moonlit


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    November 21, 2005
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    That is the deal
    to love and heal
    to hold and reach
    a place beyond speech.