I Like The Darkness

The sun is shining1

The birds are singing2

Everything feels cliche3


The sun is shining4

The birds are singing5

Everything feels cliche6


But I guess today7

Is one of the good days8


Can you feel it9

This strange feeling10

Like everything is going to be okay11


I donīt like it12

But itīs there.13

And I canīt seem to shake it14


Even though everybody wants to feel good15

I like the darkness16


This cheerful song17

Echoes in my head18

All happy chords and mushy lyrics19


Can you believe it?20

Itīs just not me21

But it will not go away.22


Even though everybody wants to feel good23

I like the darkness.24


All the world is shining25

Everything is so bright.26

This must be 27

What all those happy people sing about28


But I donīt like it ...29


Yet I canīt deny it30

I sense the appeal31

Of this strange cheerful rythm32


I see my mouth33

In the bathroom mirror34

I had forgotten what my smile looked like35


All the world is shining36

Everything is so bright.37

This must be 38

What all those happy people sing about39


But even though everybody wants to feel good40

I like the darkness.41


Gimme a cure 42

I feel like dancing43

And I donīt dance!44

Come on45

I even feel like46

I could enjoy47

Things with rainbows and butterflies!48


Even though everybody wants to feel good49

I like the darkness.50


All the world is shining51

Everything is so bright.52

This must be 53

What all those happy people sing about54


All the world is shining55

Everything is so bright.56

This must be 57

What all those happy people sing about58


But I like the darkness59

I like the darkness60

I like the darkness ....

Author notes

I wanted to write a happy song. This is as close as I could get

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  • Marta gold member
    October 29

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    I don't do happy real good, I've had to work at it....really hard. I like your song, very original.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


    • Dark Legend
      October 29
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      Yeah as you can see I´m not very good either Thanks for the comment.


  • Queenie-Chan
    October 27

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    lol good work on this lol you should join a gothic rock band lol


  • Lies4Truth
    October 26

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    Similar to my attempts to write happyness. It just doesnt work out. Great Job of course I like how you described it. Very lyrical and wonderful Amazing!

  • OnlyHereByForce
    October 26
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    ...and first comment? Score!

  • OnlyHereByForce
    October 26

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    The fact that you even tried this puts the biggest, goofiest grin on my face ever.
    I can't even tell you how much I love it
    I also started copying and pasting my favorite lines... then realized it was essentially the whole song.
    Seriously, just love.
    Epic. Win. <33333


    • Dark Legend
      October 26
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      lol, it means a lot you liked it that much. Since it was for you

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