Demoness Rising: Prologue

Prologue 1

To say that death is the one thing most of us fear, is true. Only the
foolish do not fear the unknown worlds of Heaven and Hell.2

I myself do not fear death, because I have lost everything I ever had to live for.3

Of course, my people don't have very many reasons to fear death. Even then, at least they have something, lovers, children, even pets.4

But I? I haven't even had a reason to keep going. My purpose long lost in the God's secrets.5

To think that someday, somehow I might find a reason to live, is the only thought that truly keeps me going.6

My name is Almyra Bartlett, and I am a soul sucking Demon.

Author notes

This popped into my head and I decided to get it down while I had it. I might continue, I might not. Kinda depends on homework, and band stuff. I like what I have, so I'm probably going to try to continue.

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  • Shadow06
    November 8
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    It's good so far. Keep going.


  • HaydenLautner
    October 27

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    This was a great beggining for a novel. I hope you post more chapters. I love the name, it's very original.
    The story looks to be somewhat dark, which is a great thing. I love dark stories ..
    Well done, and continue it please!


  • blue waterfall
    October 26

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    it sounds like the begening of a long and in somesense horrifing story,i would like to know how to pronounce that name if you would be so kind. this sounds like somthing a freind would read and i would like to tell him about it if that's ok with you. or if it's not to much troube i could give you his SW name or vic versa,agian if your ok with that. again a wonderfull prolog i know i'm looking foward to reading the rest.


  • Kimi-san
    October 26

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    Ha sounds like me