As for you my friend (part 9)

Sarafeena quickly emerged from the vision turned towards Eku and Claic,the turned and quickly left.1

"What the hell is wrong with her?" Eku asked, looking at Claic.2

"I dont know but it's killing me...I must know what she saw." 3

"Don't go without me please?" Eku said getting up from the bed.4

"NO, you need to rest..for our..for you and the baby,love" Claic said trying to put her back to bed.5

"NO I'm going with you, regardless, I'm fine and so is our baby" Eku said.6

Claic helped Eku off the bed, he didnt want to, but he knew nothing would stop her from getting her way. He liked that about her. She probably felt the same.  7

"Sarafeena, You better open up...or I swear I'll" Eku said trying not to pass out again. 8

"Babe, maybe you should let me..." 9

"Sarafeena open the damn door, or I'll kick your ass!" Eku said.10

Sarafeena softly opened the door...pulled Eku in and shut it behind them.11

"You musnt tell Claic, swear to me you wont?" 12

"I swear...not what did you see?"13

"You, and your baby, only claic wasnt there...he wasnt anywhere...you were running from something..and I couldnt tell but you were crying".14

"I..what...Claic...he's...No...." Eku said15

Eku took off out the door in tears.16

"Whats.wrong?" Claic said running after her.17

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  • BlackedAshes
    November 16, 2005
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    Awwwwwww hwat happend you must tell me no "Open the damn door, or ill kick your ass" lol I liked that line lol.

  • Rairi
    November 11, 2005
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    Great tale, still full of emotion. Even though I wasn't in it, It was still terrific, and proves your standing as a great writer. You are gifted, don't let anyone tell you otherwise! I don't care what people say...you are gonna be famous for your writing!