Footsteps (chpt one)

Walking through the rain was the calmest thing i could do when i was feeling depressed or sad.  So I walked.  Just thinking about life gave a chill up my spine even though i have been writing about it for about 3 years.  As i walk i hear footsteps behind me, but not the ordinary footsteps of a nice lady or man exercising.  I don't dare to look back.  I walk faster.  So do the footsteps.  I run.  Faster and faster i ran until i couldn't hear the footsteps anymore.  I looked back-nothing there.  I looked forward, relieved.  A man grabs me, threatening me with a knife.  I try to scream, but nothing comes out.  "YOU do what I say for now on, got that?!?!?"1

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Well... this is just something i came up with... hope you enjoy it... not my BEST thing in the world but i would apreciate comments!

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  • misunderstood09
    November 6, 2005
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    hey wish u were on!great i cant wait till chap 2 and on but if u make them while im at my moms i cant read them unless i go to ur dads house but after i do my homework well if u get on i should still be here!
    kayla