Bashed Up Brother- Chapter 1

Alice Wilson was ten . She had short black hair which was always tied up in two pigtails on the sides of her head. She wore her pink and yellow tank-top and her purple polka-dot converses, but her khaki shorts were covered in mud and grass.1

'Hey' Alice screamed 'Whats your problem, leave me alone!' She had just been pushed into the mud by her brothers best friend, Jason Jackson. 'Why should I listen to you?' Jason asked her. 'Because my brother will come get you!' she screamed as her eyes welled up and spilled over. 2

'He will not' Jason told her 'He dared my me to do it in the first place!' 3

Alice couldn't believe what she had just heard, she stood up in a huff and ran to the closet girls bathroom to the football field. She pushed open the door with one hand as the other hand wiped her eyes which were now full of wet tears. 4

Inside the bathroom, Alice ran to the cubical that was closest and flushed the toilet to block out the sound of her crying her eyes out. There were also other girls in the bathroom too.
Alice dint like the girls because of there way of life.5

Alice didn't take things seriously and was always a kid of laid back person, on the other and these girls only cared for looks

Author notes

I didn't know how to start on this story.
The theme is bullying. But we all like brother and sister rivalry! lol!
But the brother of Alice Wilson doesn't know whats coming.
School and Friends help this kid though life

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  • Alice, who the... is Alice?
    naw it's sad.


  • Once Upon A WOW
    October 26
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    By the way,

    What do you think should happen to Jason.. help I need ideas!

  • Once Upon A WOW
    October 26
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    Hey Its Me, SecretJamandToast

    There will be chapter two.
    Jason will get whats coming for him after pushing Alice into the mud and ruining her favorite pants