OH MY GOD TRACE....1
Is here, the brother of Brian "Trace what are you doing here anyway? Shouldn't you be home playing worshiper to Brian?" His smile fades a little "Actually I don't worship him, I just do that so he doesn't act like a total jerk off to me and so he doesn't spill my secret to our mom and dad" "O-oh I-I'm Sorry to hear that" I look down and turn a little red from the previous stuttering I did. "It's alright. Ha-ha cute stuttering you've got there." Wow! I can't believe a Meraldy would have ever speak to me so kindly like Trace did, I mean there cousin and other family members I've seen at school always seemed so stuck up and looked at me like I wasn't from this planet! Suddenly Trace grabs my hand, pulling me up and I loose my balance but Trace puts his arm around my waist balancing me and I blush. As Trace lets go of me he asks if he could walk me home, so I let him. As we're walking we talk about school and how we both like English class and our birth day's. Trace Is going to be 17 in 4 weeks. Wow he's way older then me. We keep walking and chatting along and I stare at him (good thing he doesn't notice) he's actually really cute, why haven't I noticed this till now? Suddenly he looks over at my gaze and asks "Crap. Is there something on my face?" and I blush "U-uh n-no I just n-n-noticed how y-you have sh-shinny h-h-hair" OMG! Did I just stutter again?! I stutter when I'm nervous or don't know what to say, I feel so embarrassed but he smiles "Thanks you too." We finally get to my house and Trace hugs me and walks off into the night. I look at my watch hm I'm 18 minutes early Its only 8:43 so I open the door and find my nanny Mrs, Richards sitting on the couch watching an old romance movie it looks like, she must be thinking about her husband I bet, 2 years ago her husband died. I guess he was walking past a construction sight and a board came flying and struck him in the head, of course that seems like it wouldn't kill a person, but.... They're was nails in the board and they went straight into his head. I shiver thinking about that. I walk up to my room and shed my clothes, slip on my rob and go into the bathroom for a shower. Ahh! I smell like cinnamon, then I go to my room and slip on some black shorts and a small purple showing my belly panda shirt and head off to bed.
Tell me what you think of the book so far.
Comments
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I hope you write more, I think this is very well interesting. I admire those who can write in first person, I suck at it haha. Keep writting.
Chelsey

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pretty good, i want to hear more about the cut on the ankle, and trace sounds cute. i think you should add a bit more emotion into the cutting bit.

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its good



