I Care For You

I care for you1

More than you care2

For me3


Today I gave you a compliment4

You didnīt even say thank you5


Yesterday you picked the movie6

For the hundreth time or so7


Iīm starting to doubt those feelings we share8

Iīm starting to doubt us9


Iīm starting to think ...10


I care for you11

More than you care12

For me13


I bought you a birthday gift14

You said it was the wrong color15


For my own birthday party16

You forgot to give me anything17


I hold you tight18

You push me away19


I whisper words of affection20

You pretend to be deaf21


I look into your eyes 22

You look somewhere else23


Itīs gotten to the point 24

Thatīs itīs plain to see ...25


I care for you 26

More than you care27

For me28


I bought you flowers29

You said you hated roses30


I gave you a cd31

You disliked all the songs32


I want to make you happy33

But all I seem to do is make you miserable.34


I would have given you the world35

I would have given you anything36


But why does it feel like youīd just37

throw it back in my face?38


I care for you 39

More than you care 40

For me41


Sing it with me42


I care for you 43

More than you care44

For me45


Come on46


I care for you 47

More than you care48

For me49


I care for you 50

More than you care 51

For me52


So this goodbye song53

Will be the last present54


I ever give 55

To you

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  • Ariss Rose
    October 26

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    Wow the girl in this song is sooo not worthy of the guy. He is so nice and uhh... That makes me so mad I really don't like it when a relationship is only one sided. Glad she got dumped. It was a very good peace I wish I could hear the melody to it but thats ok.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


    • Dark Legend
      October 26
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      lol, yeah, first I´d have to learn how to do melodies

      but thanks for the comment

  • OnlyHereByForce
    October 26

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    Ouch. For both of you.
    To you because she's an arsehole, and to her for getting dumped via song.

    As I previously said, I'm not sure which song is my favorite anymore. You are incredibly talented, to the point that I am more than a little jealous

    Love <333.


  • Kattie-Korpse
    October 25
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    Very true.


  • Lekos Memory
    October 25

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    Ahhh sweet but somewhat depressing. Sadly I know a few people that are like that in their relationships. I don't quite understand it. It's not like they are taking relationships seriously. Ticks me off really.

    Anyways very good job on your part.


  • Little Lilly Angel
    October 25

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    Yaayyness!!!
    Totaly sweet! ^_^ Loved the ending,

    Fave line .... Hmmm ... can't fill that part, there is a few that has to be my faves lol

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