Wonder What He's Doing Now

As I lie here on the sofa
Blood draining from my head
Wondering what he's doing now
And if he knows that i am dead1

Waking from a horrific dream?
A vision of my demise
Did he see the blood
Attracting all the flies?

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  • Paper.thin.paradox
    October 25

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    Nice...

    Did he see the blood
    Attracting all the flies?

    &

    Blood draining from my head

    These gave a very good image.

    i am dead>>I am dead :]

    Lovely job, hun.
    As always, powerful




    ~Amy