I Still Love You

What the fuck?1

What the hell did I do to deserve this?2

Did I not love you enough?3

Or was it because you found someone else?4

Maybe it was just because you thought you could’ve done better5

Well, let me tell you this6

No one will ever love you the way I did7

So passionately and loyally8

Hell, when you asked me out, I though my heart stopped9

And now here you are saying that you’re done with me10

I thought that I understood you11

But I guess that I was wrong12

You’re just another guy out for a good fuck, aren’t you?13

But then again, maybe your not14

And maybe it’s the way you say it, where YOU’RE the one that’s not good enough15

And then again, that’s probably another one of your lies16

Like the time you said you were at the arcade, and I called your cell17

You were at a bar, with your other girlfriend18

Why didn’t you even tell me that there was someone else, instead of lying to me19

Really, I would’ve backed off if you had asked me too, it would’ve saved me a lot of angry feelings20

I just can’t stop thinking about you now21

Look what you’ve done to me22

But still no matter what happened23

I still love you24

Author notes

whatever, this is just a few after-thoughts and regrets that i had after leaving my 2-year boyfriend

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  • Hbhman
    February 13, 2006
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    Powerful

    I love how this poem just screams at the guy who it's about. IT screams without regard to who is listening or where it's at. It's all of the anger and pain with that hint of love thrown in the middle to give it passion. Somehow it screams of imagery without relying on it. I love it.

  • BrokenheartandSoul
    November 5, 2005
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    thank you, and you have great work, too.


  • LadyFate
    November 5, 2005
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    Men suck. Great write.

    -Fate.